Ok if you really are reading this I would like to point a few things.don't worry it isn't about halala as I know it's your story and you'll do what you have in mind as you must have put a great deal of work in building the story.
The talaq track started in a fine way but somehow it seemed to be rushed,the iddah period I mean.I know bi never drags tracks which is one of the best things about it but I would have appreciated if a little more of aliya's perspective,her pain was shown during her stay at rehans.I got to see an excellent zain
's repentance sequence but aliya's side of the story seemed to be missing.I mean yes we saw her moments but as compared to zain aliya's
pain didn't get much light probably because she was too busy taking care of rehan's kids.
Now Shabana and ghulam,I won't say aliya should never have forgiven them coz after all they are her parents but a little remorse from their side should be there coz they are as much responsible as nafeesa.
That's all I guess,I am sorry of I offended you.π
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