Break my Karvachauth fast Samud OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Break my Karvachauth fast
 
I wrote a romantic Karvachauth special OS.Pls give a detailed comment instead of two word comments.
 
Today is Karvachauth.The first karvachauth after marriage.
Kumud remembered her first Karvachauth with Saras.She fasted for him without knowing that he would take a risk by catching a flight from Dubai to Ratnanagari to break her fast.In a way it was their first Karvachauth after marriage.Because they had that Karvachauth after Saras declared her as his wife before tying nuptial chain around her neck...after their gandharvavivah.
Those memories made her blush.

Kumud found a yellow saree on the bed.She was surprised.
K:Saras' surprise gift.I will wear this saree and go to Saras to break my fast.
She wore the yellow saree.
She waited for Saras to come.
She got restless when it was getting delayed.He rang up.
Kumud picked up the phone:Saras,where are you?
S:Sorry Kumud.I can't come.
Kumud was angry:If you can't come,why did you gift me a saree to wear now?
S:I have to go to Mumbai now itself for an urgent work.So please break your fast with my photograph.
She was upset and shocked.
K:With your photograph?What are you saying?
S:Why not?During the last Karvachauth that was your plan.Right?If I hadn't come you would have done that.Right?Then what happened now?
She was in tears.
K:Ok..your wish.
She cut the call and threw it.
She wiped her tears and walked forward.
Suddenly she heard a voice:Ready to break your fast?
She couldn't believe her eyes.
K:Saras?

She turned back in surprise.
K:Saras!
S:Moon has appeared.Shall I break your fast?
She was too happy.
K:You gave me a shock.
S:The surprise after the shock is beautiful.Right?That's why I did so.
K:You are so naughty.
He smiled.
She looked at his face through the sieve.Both were very happy.


He broke her fast by making her drink water.He offered her morsel.
She looked at his dry lips.
K:Saras...you also fasted?
S:How did you know?
K:I am your wife.I can understand that.
S:Ok ok...then break my fast soon.
She took the water.
S:Not with  water.
K:Saras...drink water.Your lips are dry.Your lips have to be wet.
Saras replied romantically:Then make my lips wet with your wet lips.
She became shy.
K:What are you saying Saras?Others will notice us.
S:If you are that conscious I will break my fast only in our room.
She blushed:Saras...you are too much.Come on drink...
She made him drink water forcefully.
She laughed.
He held her hand:I will have my morsel in our room Kumud.
She ran away blushing.
She had her dinner.
She thought:This Saras is so stubborn that he didn't have his dinner.Oh!
She went to their room.
He was not seen there.
K:Where is Saras?Must be angry with me.Let him be angry.
She was also stubborn.
She changed her saree.
She opened her window.Cold breeze peeped in.Her hair blew in air.She turned back only to see Saras look at her sensually standing close to her.
Her hair caressed his face romantically.
They were lost in each other.
He cupped her face in his hands.
S:Kumud...my lips have become dry again.Don't you see them craving for wetness?
K:Saras!

She licked her lips.Her wet lips made his lips wet.


Moraa Piyaaa...

She was very shy and moved backward.She was not able to face him.She was blushing.He held her hand

 and brought her close to him slowly.They held each other tightly.

K:Saras!
S:Shhh...let us not say anything.Let silence speak through our love.
She blushed.

Kuch na kahein, bas chup rahein



Khamoshiyan hi keh jaaye



Tham jaaye, yeh jahaan



Aur pal bhi, theher jaaye

He caressed her face softly.
Rahein na kuch bhi darmiyaan







 
He rubbed his cheek with hers sensually.

Mitey yeh saari duriyaan
Kumud closed her eyes drowning in his passionate love.

Milke bhi hain adhuri si,
Saras continued loving her while closing the windows with his one hand.
Their room got filled up with their passionate love.

Yeh daastaan...

The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome one. Loved it.
Thanks for the PM>
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is really very good and romantic. I like the way you have used the romantic snaps from different situations to illustrate your OS so well. Made me revive those pal...
That song is a killer indeed!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Very nice post .It reminded me the initial samud days.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
It's really nice Jasmine πŸ‘
I really loved it, especially the part when he said that he would not be coming but he finally came.
Keep writing and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Very good post jasmine. Really liked it.
It reminded me of the beautiful memories of our JENAM.
The pictures are beautiful.
The part where he comes is really good.
Also their passionate romance sequence is beautiful.
If the cvs had shown this it would have been beyond awesome.
Thanks for the PM.
By the way keep voting for JENAM in ITA. We have to make them win.

Only 2 days to go. Vote as many times as possible.
And also do keep tweeting to ITA people and star plus demanding for JENAM to host their upcoming shows.
Pairs will come and go but none is like our JENAM.
Wish they remained for much longer time with us. Really missing them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg omg its too good btw thanks fr d pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hayeee romanticed one❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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 Wow too good Jasmine πŸ‘

really liked it, thankyou. πŸ˜Š

keep it up πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It would have been awesome if they had shown a karvachauth sequence after SAMUD Marrige.