A First for Samarth?? - Page 6

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

It is very difficult to write such scenes..I have pestered you a lot over the same thing..but jab meri baari aayi..I went blank..words deserted me...I did put a disclaimer in the first update..but that was for unpleasant story line and gray characters...I had ample scope for steamy scenes..but couldn't write them and escaped with frequent 'one-year leap'

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Your memory deserted you Vidisha... I had promised to write one very steamy scene if started an FF or SS or OS. 😆😉

But scene ka background mujhe hi dena padtha na...uske aage peeche dialogues bhi chipkane padhthe...that was difficult too..you would write the scene parr build up ka kya..I couldn't manage even that...I had problems visualising the 'scene of crime'..things went that bad...

plus I thought that your offer was for Casanova FF only...

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Your memory deserted you Vidisha... I had promised to write one very steamy scene if started an FF or SS or OS. 😆😉

But scene ka background mujhe hi dena padtha na...uske aage peeche dialogues bhi chipkane padhthe...that was difficult too..you would write the scene parr build up ka kya..I couldn't manage even that...I had problems visualising the 'scene of crime'..things went that bad...

plus I thought that your offer was for Casanova FF only...

Originally posted by: Suvika.

But scene ka background mujhe hi dena padtha na...uske aage peeche dialogues bhi chipkane padhthe...that was difficult too..you would write the scene parr build up ka kya..I couldn't manage even that...I had problems visualising the 'scene of crime'..things went that bad...

plus I thought that your offer was for Casanova FF only...

Next time? no more Ashni fiction from me...maybe Sho-vicky😉

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

How can they show a woman walking out on a 9 year old marriage just because her huz had a ONS... an overwhwlming majority if the audience would think that she was over reacting..so the story demands that the EMA be a long one

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Guess so... But if he expected her to keep her mouth shut because in turn she was getting all the so-called respect from the society, why such a huge charade? The romantic dinners, car rides, flowers... 😕😡 Did he think a compliant wife would be easier to manipulate than a resigned one??

@Bold : Yes I guess so 😕.. by doing those gestures , he made sure Shobha blindly trusts him and to some extent he succeeded too in these 9 yrs

I wonder if in future we will see Samarth's redemption once he sees Shobha moving on in life successfully and realises what actually he lost .. 🤔

Originally posted by: Rivka

agreed .

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Good point. majority of audience will be judgmental about her decision.- as it just happened once.

Counting the years of association - "9 years of happy married affair" on literal terms ONS is just nothing. More over story seek a much more stronger reason to proove what she did is right. He might have also involved in something else along with long EMA.

yes...a lot of wrongdoing on the part of huz is required to convince the audience...so a can of worms will open tonite... lot of ex lovers...lurid details of past affairs etc etc..

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Guess so... But if he expected her to keep her mouth shut because in turn she was getting all the so-called respect from the society, why such a huge charade? The romantic dinners, car rides, flowers... 😕😡 Did he think a compliant wife would be easier to manipulate than a resigned one??

@Bold : Yes I guess so 😕.. by doing those gestures , he made sure Shobha blindly trusts him and to some extent he succeeded too in these 9 yrs

I wonder if in future we will see Samarth's redemption once he sees Shobha moving on in life successfully and realises what actually he lost .. 🤔

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

yes...a lot of wrongdoing on the part of huz is required to convince the audience...so a can of worms will open tonite... lot of ex lovers...lurid details of past affairs etc etc..

Originally posted by: Suvika.

@Bold : Yes I guess so 😕.. by doing those gestures , he made sure Shobha blindly trusts him and to some extent he succeeded too in these 9 yrs

I wonder if in future we will see Samarth's redemption once he sees Shobha moving on in life successfully and realises what actually he lost .. 🤔

He would be angry at sho...feel betrayed..resentful..harbour hatred..etc ...that is what such men do...