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I ll not call you a saut after all this lovely work you have won my heart sakhi it's utterly ... I am out of stocks of vocabulary
;)
Thanku so much dear
I m glad to win my sautan even I will call u sakhi from now thanku thanks a lot😊
I ll not call you a saut after all this lovely work you have won my heart sakhi it's utterly ... I am out of stocks of vocabulary
;)
Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix
Awesome poem
His feelings are portrayed very beautifullyLoved the way it has been composedThanks for the PMKeep writing more such lovely poems
Duryodhan may be evil devil in your sight
But for me he is my might!
He fought the world for my sake
His love for me can never be fake!!
He completes my family, I thank him a ton
I would rather die with him, then living as your son!
You blurted the truth in a single say
But look what I have to pay!
Brother or Friend what should I choose
Whatever the war results ultimately I am going to lose!
Now I have died in all possible way
How can I ever get a new life you say!!
Originally posted by: nadine_lopez_48
So beautifully written dear!
Continue writing as many fantastic poems as this one😆Maybe even more Mahabharat poems😊
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