||I Love You||~ ZaYa Drabble 30/9 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

Very nice loved it.

Originally posted by: preeharsharora

awww sho cute lyk our zaya..gr8 attempt

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Aww it was so beautifully written

I don't know when something like this will happen in the show

I am so so much craving for it

I love u for writing this avi 🤗

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Aww its too cute Avi.
You are an amazing writer.
Too good. Nice one.
Keep writing!:-)

Lots of love,
-Tanya.

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika

Awww!! It was such a lovely drabble...

I loved it

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Res! But i'm just posting the pm wala review in ok?😆

Unres

I loved it dude! It's so...ZaYa! The convo between zaya is super adorable and dream worthy.

"Of course they do, but not more than your eyes" he said

Love this! I was like hayye when i read that.

"I am nothing without you, without your love, I feel safe in your arms, you are my world"
Again, this was awesome! Ur really good in convos avi!
Ur such an amazing writer dude! Especially since u only started a few months ago (right?), it's hard for people to get the knack of writing so soon and u've manged so well! I envy u!

And the lil epilogue type para at the end is lovely, it's hard to read epilogue type stuff without getting bored, only good writers can manage to do different and u have! I simply love that end paragraph! Ur a very realistic writer, u write what's actually there in their relationship and yet u make it so beautiful. Hats off to u for that!👏

And as for the P.S, anytime! 😃