TSHJA written update 25 sept -knight in shining armour

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mariam is in her balcony when she notices Altaf
coming back from downstairs. She covers her head
and then greets him. There is an awkward silence
for a second. She tells him about what she had
heard yester night. What happened? You don't
have to leave this place because of Najma. She
wont come in front of him ever. Altaf dismisses it.
My nephew is very stubborn. If he has decided then
he will surely do it. mariam offers to apologize to
him on Najma's behalf. Altaf recalls Imran's words
about not wanting anyone's sympathy or pity. He
declines. you don't do anything or he will never
change his decision. I am trying to make him
understand. Lets see what happens. Imran calls out
for him so Altaf excuses himself. On the other
hand, Nasima calls out for Mariam. She asks
Mariam to go to school to give kids' fees. If we
don't give it today then we will have to pay fine.
She asks Mariam not to tell Younis about it. you
know he doesn't like it when women of the house go
out like this. Mariam nods.
A girl is on rickshaw. She notices Imran and tells
the rickshaw puller to stop. She looks at Imran
adoringly while DDLJ's tune plays in the
background. Imran tries to start his bike but there
is some problem. The girl is about to give money to
the rickshaw puller when she gets angry to see
that Shabnam is talking to Imran. Shabnam has
brought food for him and insists him to keep it.
Imran is getting late and declines. The other girl is
happy to see Shabnam going back to her house with
the plate. She pays the money and goes and stands
in front of Imran. Maybe your bike has broken
down. She introduces herself as Naima (Nasima's
sister). Shabnam watches this from upstairs and
doesn't look happy. Imran is not happy to know
that she has something to do with Baig House. She
continues to talk to him while he looks completely
uninterested. She continues to guess about what
would have happened to the bike and makes random
talks. Are you unmarried? My brother is looking
for a groom for me as well. He excuses himself as
he is getting late and walks off. Naima is all
moony eyed while Shabnam looks on upset.
Nasima calls Naima inside. Naima talks about
Imran. He is so shy. Nasima tells him not to talk
about that drunkard in front of Younis.
Mariam waits for an auto. She finally gets in an
empty auto. Imran comes to board it as well but
backs off seeing Mariam inside. The driver tries to
convince him saying that it takes time to find an
empty auto. Meanwhile, a guy comes and sits beside
Mariam. He too cajoles Imran to sit and Imran
finally gets in.
Nasima is talking to her Ammi on phone. I will
explain it to Naima. Naima is looking towards
Shameem's house. Rehmat Bi wonders what she is
drooling at. Naima doesn't reply. She offers to
help Rehmat Bi and asks about the new neighbour.
Any idea who all are there or anything else?
Rehmat Bi only knows that his (Imran's) wife ran
away with someone else. Naima gets happy. he is all
alone this means. Rehmat Bi tells her about how
Imran created a fuss yesterday regarding his
daughter's photo. But why are you curious? Nasima
reminds her that someone is coming to see her this
Sunday. Rehmat Bi reminds her not to miss it as
she is getting old. Maybe you wont be able to find
a match afterwards. She heads for the kitchen.
Shabnam comes to invite them for an event due
next week. She intentionally spills it that Naima
was talking to Imran. He is not a good guy. Naima
plays the cards back at her only. They both end up
taunting each other for talking to Imran. Nasima
sends off Shabnam and warns Naima too.
Altaf is trying to bargain with the scrap dealer.
Jamaal comes running there. He hides asking them
not to tell anyone about him. they get to know
about Makhmal who is after Jamaal. Altaf laughs at
him but agrees to save him. makhmal asks him if
he has seen someone running from here. He enjoys
it when Makhmal talks ill against Jamaal. He sends
him off in the opposite direction. Jamaal and Altaf
have another fun moment pulling each other's legs.
The guy checks with the auto driver about the
route. Imran is talking to some Ashraf about his
new house. He has been declined to shift there
which upsets him. the other guy tries to get cosy
with Mariam. He puts his arm almost around
Mariam. The guy hears his convo and sympathises
with him. no one gives house to bachelors on rent.
Mariam tells him to sit properly. Imran observes
her discomfort. He calls Ashraf again and talks
calmly to him. please get me some other place. I
want to shift from there asap. Meanwhile, the guy
stealthily puts his hand over knee and she is
shocked by his gesture. Imran notices this. He holds
the hand of the guy and tells the auto driver to
stop the auto. He thrashes the guy badly. Mariam
asks the driver to stop them but he has no idea as
to why they are fighting actually. Mariam goes
quiet. The guy wonders if Imran wants to enjoy all
alone after which he gets beaten all the more
badly. Once Imran is done, he asks Mariam as to
where she was going. She replies that she was going
to submit kids' school fees. He offers to drop her.
She tries to decline but he points out that there is
no guarantee of such people. What if he comes
back? I know I am not counted among the good
people but I am not that bad. Mariam looks at him
in surprise. He sits inside the auto again and they
head for the school.
Naima is watching television but she is not able to
change the channel. Nasima asks her to switch it
off as Younis will be coming back any time. Naima
is not able to do anything. Just then Saba comes
home and greets them. naima has been waiting for
her. saba lies that she had extra classes today
because of which she got late. They hear the news
where a new mall's inauguration is happening. Saba
is shocked to see herself in it and gets scared. She
requests her khala to change the channel asap or
Ammi will see it. Nasima wonders what they are
whispering about. She turns to see what's coming
on tv but Saba hugs her from behind, blocking her
view. She asks about Mariam. I am very hungry.
Nasima tries to break free as her neck is paining.
She hears Saba's voice from tv. Saba was actually
shouting excitedly. By now Naima replaces Saba
who goes and switches off the tv from the main
switch directly. Naima wonders if Mariam actually
went somewhere else afterwards. You don't take
this much time in depositing school fees. Rehmat Bi
speaks in favour of Mariam. She only goes to
mosque, nowhere else. She asks about the menu but
Nasima is ok with anything. Naima wonders why
Rehmat Bi always takes Mariam's side. Nasima
knows that Tauseef used to love / spoil her a lot
with clothes or money. She goes inside. Saba is
saved thankfully. One should talk about Choti Ammi
if you have to divert Ammi's mind.
Imran and Mariam are in the auto. Mariam recalls
everything from the start about him and all the
incidents. She keeps looking at him with concern.
They reach school finally. Mariam gets down and
thanks Imran for his help. He turns to go but she
stops him. please don't go. If you are leaving
because of me and Najma then you should not! I
know I said a lot to you that day but I was all
concerned about my daughter back then. I am
really sorry for that. Najma does not want to
trouble you. She just doesn't realise what to do
and when. She found that photo on the frame so
she got it framed. She didn't pity you. She was
just ashamed over his mistake. Please don't leave
because of us. I promise Najma wont even look
towards your window from now onwards. Waqar
notices them from inside and is confused.

Precap: Everyone is seated at the dining table.
Nasima is happy to know that Imran is leaving from
their locality. Even Younus talks against him. Saba
says he is gud hearted. Waqar too spills out that he had
come to drop Choti Ammi to school. Younus is taken
aback.

~shab 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks much for the update! :)
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Thank u 4 the lovely written update
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thanks for the written update
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