Balla Utha Chakka Laga (Zaya FF){ch.4-pg6} - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Nyc part !!
Hoping nxt part to be romantic :)
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Amazing! Kia chakka lagaya baba bi ne...awesome!
Pls cont ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Plzzz continue it soon its really nyc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Fantastic update
Plz. Cont. Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Ch 2:
Jal cookra Zain kitna cute lagta hai πŸ˜‰
Wow! Boldia hot!
Baaki sub ke paas apni wife ya gf nhi hai? πŸ˜›
Aaahhh! Hug yayyy! Thanks

Aaliya:Kyuki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho!!!!

Kitna casually boldiya, awesome, dude! πŸ‘

BABA BI - Kyuki Bewkuf who bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai...

Baba BI, aap kitni achi ho :)

Zain to aaliya:Dekho maamu ki bhanji tum use sirf hug karogi aur kuch bhi nahi...samjhi?

Hug krne ki pernission day di, bari baat hai for Zain

Zain:thank u so much she is my wife...

Virat: Oh!...

Hahaha 🀣

Zin ignored her but then he heard the crash of a car.

Zain:AALIYA!!!!!!!!!!!

Aap writers ko achay scene may tragedy laana zaroori hota hai?!
Haan, oskay baad acha scene or acha hojata hai ;)
par yeh toh ek chal hai jo maine yaani iss FF ki writer ne chali hai...
Chal, lol! Dude u're goodπŸ‘

Ch 3:

Aaliya:Zainnn...zzz...Iii...l...ii..ll...ooo...vv..ee...u..

Zain: I LOVE U TOO AALIYA...

Yay! The confession πŸ˜ƒ what a start to the chapter
It was really good, esp the kiss!
Dekhlo baba BI me comment kr rhi hn, tou aapki rooh mujhay na sataye
Edited by neenzz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Chapter 4

Both of them were exploring each other's mouth.

Now Zain was inside her bed and aaliya above him.

Zain:Tumhe main hot nahi lagta na?

Abh dekho...

And takes out his t-shirt.

Aaliya:Zain yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Shirt pehno...koi aajaega

Zain:aane do meri mehbooba...and holds her very tightly.

Zain pinned her flicks back.

Aaliya:Ek baat bolo...

Zain:Bolo...

Aaliya:Us khidki se humein nurse dekh rahi hai...

Actually use andar anna...par...

Zain flips her and kisses passionately.

Zain:Abh main kisiko bhi andar nahi aane dunga.

Aaliya:Pagal ho?

Zain:Haan hoo...and digs his head in her chest...tumhare pyaar mein...

Aaliya:Mental ho?

Zain:Haan ho...and bites her...

Aaliya:AAah

Zain:Tumne kardiya hai...apne pyaar mein...

Aaliya:Zainnn...mujhe dard ho raha hai...Aaahhh

Zain:Kya...kaha...*and he gets down from the bed*

Aaliya signals the nurse o come in.

Aaliya:Abh tum jao...nurse aagayi na?

Zain:BAdi chalak ho tum...

Aaliya:Who to main hooo

Zain:Tumhe main ghar pe dekh lunga...

Nurse giggles

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BABA BI - Abhi aadha ashriwad se kaam chala lo...plz...

Kal pakka ek baddi update...par apna pyaar mat rokna...

Aur haan comment karna warna...

MERI AATMA TUMHE HAMESHA SATEYGI!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Very cute despo zain really nyc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Aww desperate zain <3
Lovely part
Continue fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Cute n lovely update
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
awesome ff!!!πŸ‘
loved it❀️
plz continue soon..
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