Balla Utha Chakka Laga (Zaya FF){ch.4-pg6} - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Wow
Yaar it's amazing
Totally different story
Soo nice
Iam loving this jealousy zain
Last accident part omg unexpected
But interesting too
Eagerly waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
WOW! KYA BAAT HAI!
BABA BI TUMHE TO MANA PAREGA!
CONTINUE REALY SOON AAJ HI UPDATE KARDO PLZ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Amazing part :)
BABA BI Rocked !!
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Seriously Loved the whole update so much
Laughed like never before
And ending couldn't be better than Aliya's accident
Continue ASAP
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Amazing update... I love it plz cont. And do PM me plz plz... Tnx
Edited by LoveBeintehaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awww Jealous Zain 😆 😆 and Lover Aaliya 😉
Awesome chp it was 👏 👏 👏

Plz update chp-3 soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Wow!!! Amazing
Loved it
Pls cont soon
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#28

Chapter 3

Zain took Aaliya in his arms and rushed towards the hospital.

He laid her down on the stretcher.

And held her hand

Zain:Aaliya...Aaliya aankhein kholo...

Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta...maamu ki bhanji...

MAAMU KI BHANJI...

And he started crying very loudly.

Aaliya was opening her eyes very very slowly

Zain:Aaliya tum mujhe chod kar kahi nahi jaane wala...

Plz aakhein khuli rakhna...plz...

Aaliya:Zainnn...zzz...Iii...l...ii..ll...ooo...vv..ee...u..

Zain: I LOVE U TOO AALIYA...

Apni akhein kuhli rakho plz...

But she was unable to hear him...she closed her eyes...

Doctor:Mr.Zain iske aage aap nahi jaa sakti...

(at this point of time all the family members gathered there)

Osman:Zain...tum theek to ho...

Aaliya kahan hai?

Zain:Dad...

Who wahan hai

*Pointed towards the ICU*

Doctor:Apne aap ko sambhaliye...

Operation se pehle aap ko in papers par sign karna padega...

Zain:Yeh kya hai?

Doctor:Isme yeh likha hai ki agar aapki wife ko kuch bhi hota hai to hum zimedar nahi honge...

Zain:Uuu!!!!!

He holds the collar of the doctor

Dhyan se sun le agar meri biwi ko kuch bhi hua...kuch bhi...

Main tujhe nahi chodunga...

Osman trying to remove his hand from doctor's collar

Osman:Zain...Zain...chodo use

He leaves him

Zain falls down on his knees and begs to the doctor

Zain: Doctor...plz...plz...

MEri Aaliya ko bacha lena...plz...

Main uske bina nahi jee paunga...

Doctor: Hum puri koshish karenge unhe bachane ki...

Aap sambhaliye apne aap ko...

He leaves from there and starts the operation.

Zain is crying on his dad's shoulder

Zain:Dad mujhe maaf kardijiye...

Main aapki bhanji ka dhyan nahi rakh paya...

Osman:Sshhh Zain

Iss waqt aaliya ko tumhari zaroorat hai...

Use dawa nahi dua chahiye...

Zain got up from there and rushed towards a masjid nearby

He went to the darga and prayed for Aaliya...FOR HIS LIFE

Zain: Kyun Allah?

MEri aaliya ke saath aisa kyun kia...woh to aapk bandi hai na?

Main aaj...jisne kbhi nawaaz nahi padhi...kabhi kuch bhi spiritual nhi kiya...

Aaj main aapke samne apne haath failaa raha hoon...

Mujhe meri aaliya wapas de dein...

MEri bas yahi dua hai...

Zain got a call from his dad.

Osman:Zain Jaldi aao...Aaliya hosh mein aa gayi...woh theek hai...

And he cuts the call.

Zain:Allah tune meri sun le...

After saying those words he rushed towards the hospital.

He ran towards aaliya's room

Zain:Aaliya!!

He found every family member there...

Aaliya:Zain...aah...

She tried fetting up but zain stopped her...

Osman:chaliye hum sab chalet hain...

Ab tumm dono bat karo...

They all left

Zain:Pagal ho???

Kya zaroorat thi road ke beech mein khade hokar maafi mangne ki??

Abh kush ho?

Do paar hadi turwar kar...huh...

Aaliya:Zainnn

Zain:Tum chup raho...

Tumhe agar kuch hojata toh...

Tumne kabhi socha hai mera kya hota?

Main mar jaata...

Aaliya:Kyun?

Zain:Idiot!!! Coz

I LOVE U!!!!

Aaliya: I LOVE U TOO!!

And crashed her lips to his...

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BABA BI - Are mere bhakt jano...

Abhi kahani puri nahi hui hai...to dhekte raheye aur comment karte rheye.

Aur yaad rakhyeye aagar comment nahi kia toh mera aatma tumhe hamesha satayegi

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"Balla utha chakka laga"

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Meet first
Nice update
I really liked the last part n even baba bi
Continue ASAP
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Baba aap har update mein chakke laga rahe hain
Superb
Loved it baba
Aap dhanya hai
Continue soon
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