Balla Utha Chakka Laga (Zaya FF){ch.4-pg6}

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!
Probably if this forum arranged any award show for
the writers,
then i would definitely get an award for
"The Ut-Patang Title Award"
coz u all know which kind of heads i give to my FFs
And finally my exams are over!!!!
I am so happy!!
OK so lot of Bakwaas done ab story start karte hai
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Balla Utha Chakka Laga

Prologue:
Osman:Zain miyaan yeh dheko teen tickets kal ke match ke liye.
Zain:Woaah Dad
Jab saath honge aap main aur rizwaan toh khub jame ga rang...
Osman:Rang toh jamega par usme main nahi Aaliya hogi...
Zain:KYA????
(Woh maamu ki bhanji!
Rang mei bhang dal degi )
Mera matlab kyun??
Osman:Kyuki tumhare baap ke pass aur bhi bahut kaam hai...
aur waise bhi tum dono ki shadi ko thoda hi time hua...aur kahi ghumne bhi nahi gaye...jao ghum aayo.
Zain had to accept coz he van't disagree his father.

Zaya room:
Zain threw the tickets on the bed and aaliya picked them.
Aaliya:WOOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!
Zain kept his hand on her mouth.
Zain:Maamu ki bhanji pagal ho gayi ho kya?
Itni jor se kyun chilayi?
Aaliya:Zain dekho kal ke match
INDIA vs West Indies
Ki do tickets!!!!!
Aaa
Virat kohli hoga wahan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAA
Cheeku I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zain:PAgal ho gayi ho kya? dheere!!
Aur yeh cheeku kaun hai??
Aaliya:Mera pehla pyaar,
Mera dream man,
Mera Hottie , mera humk
Mera sabkuch...
Virat Kohli...
Zain plz...plz... mujhe tumhare saath jana hai...
Plz...plz...plz...plz
Zain first got jealous coz his wife loves someone else...
then he thought she is just maamu ki bhanji not his wife...
Zain:Tumhe match dhekna hai...
Aaliya:Haannn
Zain:to mujhse tickets le lo...
Aaliya:Zain do mujhe...mujhe cheeko dhekne jaana hai...
Do
They both fall on the bed...above each other.
Suddenly there is knock on the door.
They get up from their bed.
Aaliya opens the door.
Aaliya:Achaa hua maamu aap aa gaye...
dhekiye na Zain mujhe tickets nahi de raha...
mujhe bhi jaan a hai...kya main jaa sakti hu?
Osman:Woh ticket to tumhari hi hai...
Zain do...
She takes the ticket from his hand and kisses the ticket
Aaliya:Thank u maamu...apko pata nahi mujhe cricket kitna pasand hai...cricket zyaada mujhe VIRAT KOHLI pasand hai...
Thank u so much...And hugs him
Osmaan:Chalo main chalta hoon...bahut rt ho gayi hai...
He whispers something in Zain's ear..
"dekho lo miyaan...dekhlo...
Aaliya kis se pyaar karti hai"
Zain was feeling very jealous coz of Virat Kohli.
Now God only knows what will happen if aaliya sees Vk.
What will happen in the match...????
To know more...
stay tuned
#BEINTEHAA
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INDEX:
Prologue - Above
Chapter 1 - Page 2
Chapter 2 - Page 3
Chapter 3 - Page 4
Chapter 4 - Page 6 (Chota hai par pakka agla update bada hoga... Pinky promise)
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"Koi Naa Tujhko Rok Sakaa
Balla Utha Chhakka Laga"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb concept
Really interesting
Jealous Zain awesome
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg unique concept
aww jealousy zain
plz continue ASAP
amazing start
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome theme and I really wanna see that type of jealous zain hope u update soon and do pm me
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really very interesting concept
pls cont ASAP
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lol loving this
very different
but very nice
update soon
pls pm me when u update
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Awesome prologue !!
Continue soon pls
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Plzzz continue soon its really amazing aww jealous zain
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Superb prologue!!
Jealous zain amazing!
Pls cont soon n pm me pls
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Chapter 1:

"dekho lo miyaan...dekhlo...

Aaliya kis se pyaar karti hai"

These words were roaming around his mind.

Zain: Cheeku...yeh bhi koi naam hota hai kya...

Haan mana ki cricket toda bahut achaa khel leta hai par...

Cheeku?

Aaliya:Zain tum chup rehte ho ki tumhe main...takes the pillow and starts hitting him.

Zain:Achaa sorry maamu ki bhanji,,,,,ab toh chod do...

Aaliya:Dekho main cheeku se bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut...

Jeetna koi kisi se nahi kar sakta...main use utna pyaar karti hoon...

Ek minute rukk...main tumhe kuch dhikati hoon...

She goes to get something.

Zain to himself

"Logo ki biwi unse pyaar karti hai aur yahan...

Meri biwi us cheeku...I mean Virat kohli pe marti hai?"

Aaliya:Mai aa gayi...

Zain:To main hoon yahan virat kohli nahi...

Aaliya:tum chup raho idiot...yeh dekho...

Zain:Kya hai yeh?

She shows him an album which has Virat kohli's photographs

Aaliya:Hai na achi album?

Bahut mehnat se banayi hai maine...

Tumhe pata hai jab bhi who khelta hai to kitna hot lagta hai...

OMG...

Yeh dekho uske bina shirt waali photo...

HAyyeee

Main to mar jaungi...

Kitna HOT hai

Zain:Hmmm Bahut hot yeh tumhara cheeku...

Par hume sona bhi hai...

(HOT HOT kare jari hai kabse...

Waise to mujhe dekhti rehti hai...par hot use bolti hai...

Huh!)

Aaliya:Haann sorry ...

Chalo sote hai...

She arranges the pillows in between and sleeps.

Zain is not sleeping...he can't sleep

Coz his wife loves someone else...

Zain:Dekho to madam ko kitne maze se so rahi hai...

Haye mera cheeku*imitates her*

Cheeku se pehle main hoon maamu ki bhanji...

Kabhi mujhe bhi aise pyaar se Jaanu bula liya karo...

Suddenly aaliya kicks him in her sleep

Aaliya:I LOVE U...

Zain:Awww

Aaliya:Cheeku!!!!

I LOVE U CHEEKU

Zain:Maamu ki bhanji!!

He was about to throw a pillow at her but then e realized that she was looking so cute while sleeping.

Zain:Maamu ki bhanji...cheeku ka mausam gaya...

Ab tumhare jaanu ka waqt hai...

Zain tu pagal hjo gaya hai???

Main aur maamu ki bhanji se pyaar?

NEVER EVER!!!

BABA BI - Pyaar to tujhe ho chukka ha beta ab bas...

IKRAAR KARNE BACHA HAI

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"Balla utha chakka laga..."

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