TSHJA-23rd september Written Update Imran's past

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Mariam scolds Najma for going to someone's house
stealthily. What if the chits flew away? They were
mere moments not life. You brought
embarrassment in return! What if he tells this to
everyone then your Dadajaan will be hurt. Najma
talks about her Abbu's memories. Mariam tells her
that memories are not life. In reality, you have
made a mistake. Why don't you understand? I
cannot fight with everyone, inside and outside, for
you. I am forgiving you for the last time thinking
it to be your last mistake. If you go to his house
again or talk to him even then I will send you to
your grandmother's house. Najma cannot stay
without her Ammi and hugs her promising not to
talk to Imran ever again. mariam has forgiven her.
they turn to go and find Altaf standing there. He
wants to talk to her regarding something.
Mariam starts walking with Najma. He follows her
and tries to explain Imran's stance. Don't take him
wrong. You know nothing about him. mariam is not
even interested. I had heard a lot and have seen
everything with my own eyes. They start walking
ahead while Altaf tells them that Imran is not a
killer. He is a dead man from his heart, walking
dead man. Can someone live if his wife, whom he
loved more than his life, ran away with his friend?
Mariam stops in her tracks. Altaf wipes his tears
and goes closer. My nephew is not a murderer. His
happiness has been killed. He has been killed. Fate
snatched everything from him and left him with
nothing except insults. Najma calls out for Ammi
but Mariam is rooted to her place.
Altaf shares about how much Imran used to love his
wife Zeenat. His best friend cheated him. She had
left him in dark. He dint kill his daughter but
Zeenat was the reason behind it. they all had gone
to Nainital. They were really happy together but
Imran dint know that his cheater friend is already
there. The same incident is shown. Imran's friend
had signalled Zeenat to come just when Imran had
gone to bring ice creams for his wife and
daughter. He had gone to bring it unaware about
what was conspiring. Zeenat had excused herself
for two minutes when Imran had gone to get the
ice cream. She left that innocent girl alone and
went away with her lover. Mehak fell in the lake
while trying to get a ball out. Imran could have
borne the loss of his wife but he couldn't handle
losing his daughter. Mehak went in deep waters by
the time Imran could do anything. He had gone in
the water to save his daughter even though he dint
know how to swim. How could he save his daughter
when his own life was in danger? Two men had
pulled him out of the lake. He saw his daughter
drowning before his own eyes helplessly. People
saved him but he lost Mehak. Mariam and Najma
have tears in their eyes. Altaf says, he used to
love Mehak a lot. He broke down after his
daughter's death. Mariam asks about Zeenat and is
told that she blamed Imran for their daughter's
loss. Imran lived with the burden of losing his
daughter. One day Zeenat left him and everyone
blamed him for everything. Everyone used to taunt
him only. He is switching places every now and then
to run away from those memories only. Today he
had taken out Mehak's photo after a long time. He
had got it framed. By mistake Najma broke that
only and Imran couldn't control himself. He felt
that he couldn't save his daughter once again. If
you still think that he is not a good man after
knowing this then you are free to hate him. May
Allah bless you with happiness! Saying so, he walks
away from there while Mariam is feeling bad about
what happened.
Imran continues to drink while Mariam's, Salman
Baig's and everyone's words haunt him. He is really
disturbed and breaks a bottle angrily. He takes
some deep breaths to calm himself. He looks at the
broken pieces on the floor and imagines how his
daughter used to smile, especially at his poems. He
collects those pieces and recalls how Mehak had
drowned in the lake. He holds them near him.
Mariam and Najma sit blankly in their room.
Mariam is still thinking about what Altaf had told
her. Najma says we all were so wrong about him.
mariam feels bad for saying so much to him without
even thinking. Najma wants to apologize to Imran
but Mariam tells her not to. It takes time to
forget memories and we have actually hurt him all
over again. we should leave him on his own. I too
want to apologize to him but this is not the right
time. Najma wonders why people are deprived of
their happiness. Allah took my Abbu and his
(Imran's) daughter. Mariam reasons that Allah only
gives that much pain to people which they can bear.
Allah will surely fill happiness in Imran's life. Najma
feels better and lies down to sleep.
Jamaal's Ammi asks for tea from Bilkish. She
complains about less milk in the tea. Jamaal comes
running home and asks his Amma to save him. his
friend Makhmal Lakhnavi is after him. I had given
him my shayaris and he said them in some program.
He was beaten for that and he is after me now.
Jamaal looks for a place to hide. Finally Bilkish goes
to open the door. Makhmal asks for Jamaal. He
looks around for him in the house but Amma replies
that he has ran away from the backdoor. Makhmal
leaves after giving them a warning. Bilkish closes
the door and Jamaal tries to come out of his hiding
place but is stuck. Bilkish and his Amma try to help
him get out of it.
Najma has fallen asleep. Mariam goes to keep her
box in the cupboard she notices Imran sitting all
alone in his dark room. She thinks about his loss
and his hurt and feels sad. I know what it is to lose
your loved ones. May Allah give him happiness once
again!
Bilkish and Jamaal's Amma continue to try get him
out of the big drum. Bilkish comes back with saw
but he is scared of getting hurt so she drops it.
Next morning, Imran is up early. Altaf tries to get
talking him by talking random stuff. Imran takes
Mehak's photo and picks up his helmet. Next time
keep the doors closed, especially from this side
(pointing towards baig's house).
Najma comes out on her balcony just then and
notices Imran going somewhere. She recalls her
mother's words about giving some time to Imran.
Downstairs, Imran gets a call from someone and
agrees to come over. His bag falls off from the
handle. He drives off unaware of it while Najma
tries to call out to him to make him notice it but
he drives away. najma goes downstairs and picks up
the bag. A woman observes all this from her
terrace. She even checks what is inside the bag
(mehak's photo). She thinks about Altaf's words as
she looks at it

Precap: Imran asks for Najma. She has something
that belongs to me. Younus tells him that Najma
wont pick up anything that is fallen on the road.
Imran has been told by some lady that Najma has
my bag. Younis calls out for Najma. She is indeed
holding his bag. Mariam questions Najma. Till when
will you embarrass me like this? Najma innocently
replies that she had only gone to get Imran's
daughter Mehak's photo framed. I had broken it to
I had decided to rectify my mistake. Imran and
Mariam are speechless.

~shab 😊
Edited by sweetshab - 10 years ago
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