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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Scene 1:
Zain opened the letter when he got up from the bed in morning.
Zain:KYA???
Aaliya...
He shouted and run towards the door but...
He cameback...
Zain:Huh...

Wah ek emotional sa letter likh ke chali gayi...

Tumhe kya lagta hain Zain abdullah tumhe manane aayega?

Huh kabhi bhi nahi...KABHI BHI nahi Maamu ki bhanji

Scene2:

BZ:Jooth bole kau kate...haan joothe bole kaua kate...

haan kale kaua se mat daryo par mujhse zaroor daryo...

Zain:TU?????

BZ:Haan main!Kyun bhul gaya mujhe?

Are main wahi jo tujhe tere dil ki baatein batata hai...

Zain:SAb jaanta hoon main tu kon hai...

Kyun aaya hai...main aaliya ke pass nahi jaunga...

BZ:Theek hai mat ja main to bus itna bolne aaya hoon ki main abhi isi hi waqt aaliya ke pass ja raha hoon...

Zain:Kya??

BZ:Haan abh tu to ja nahi raha toh main hi chale jaat hoon...

aur aaliya ko bata deta hoon ki woh tera pass kabhi bhi na aaye kyuki tu kisi or ke saath bhag gaya...aur phir main usko apna banalunga...woh tujhe chod degi!!

Main uske piche woh mere piche...

TOO MUCH FUN!!!!

aahh kya jodi hogi mere aur teri biwi ki..

HappyJourney nahi bolega?

Zain:OYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHUP REH!!!!!WOH MERI BIWI!!!!

BZ:Jab tu yeh maanta hai ki woh teri biwi hai to kyun nahi jaata uske pass?Kyun use i love you nahi bolta?

Kyun?

Zain thinking...

BZ:Zain tu use pyaar karta hain...dekh woh kal se gayi hui hai...par tujhe us ke bin chain hi nahi hai...tu nahi reh sakta us ke bina...YOU LOVE HER...woh hi teri Zindingi hai...use koi nahi nikal sakta tumhari zindgi se...

Samjha?

Zain:Samjha...chal bye...

Zain left for his Aaliya...


Scene 3 at bhopal:


Ammi:Aaliya dekh...tu samjhati kyun nahi ...pati patni ka jhagada hota hai...par iska matlab yeh nahi meri bachi ki tum ghar se aa jao...Zain kya hoga? beta iske baare mein soch..

And she leaves

Aaliya:Kuch nahi hoga...mere bina kush hoga...

Aaliya is taking out her clothes and accessories

She finds the earing which Zain gave to her...

She remembers that moment...

Now Zain has entered her house:

Zain:Salaam alequm phoops

Shabana:Aslaam Walequm

Suna hai aapne humari aaliya bitya ko...

Zain:Aaliya kahan hai...??

Shabana:hhh...woh room mein hai upar...

Zain rushed to room and what he saw was...

Aaliya sleeping with book over her face..

Zain removed the book and...

Zain:Maamu ki bhanji dam ghut jayega...

Suddenly Saif,Arun and Sana entered...

Arub:CHACHI!!!!

Aaliya got up...

and saw Zain...they had an eyelock

Aaliya:Saif,Arub,sana tum yahan kaise aayein?

Said all this while hugging all three off them

while Zain is only looking at her

Fahad enters

Fahad:Main laya...

Aaliya:Are fahad bhai...aap

comes and hugs him also...

Fahad:Haan kyun main nahi aa sakta...?

Aaliya:Aap toh kabhi aye apka hi ghar hai...

Fahad looks at Zain

Fahad:Zain tum?

Tumne to kaha tha tum hotel checking ke liye aaye ho...

Zain:Hann main to usi ke liye aaya tha...main to bus aa...se...phups se milne aaya tha...

Fahad:Phoopi se ya...

chalo chodo...

bacho chalo...aaliya chachi ko araam karna hai na...

pehle naashta phir chachi ke pass aa jaana..

Arub:Ok dad

They all left.

Aaliya was also about to leave but zain stopped her by pulling her back...

Zain:Main bhi toh naha ke hi aaya tha mujhe hug karne mein kya pronlem hai?

She removed his hand from her hand...

Aaliya:Bahut badi problem hai!!!

Jo tumne hi create ki hai!!

And left.

Z-BZ

Z:Are baap re...yeh to bhut zyada gusa hai...

BZ:abh bugut jo tune uske saath kiya...

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"Bas dua mein yaad rakhna kyuki...

Day after tomorrow I have an exam..."

Edited by -Mera-Hi-Jalwa- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Read both the parts they are awesome!!
Continue soon
Thanx for d pm
All d best for ur exams
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Cool yaar awesome eagerly waiting for the next part!!!
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
SUPRERB update!!
Update soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Plz pm me...n buddy also.v nice ff..cntinue soon n best of luck...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
both the chapters r fabulous
"main bhi naha ke aaya mujhe hug karne mein kya problem hai'"hahahahahahahahaha rofl
all the best for ur exam
superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice one.
And take this as a request.
Do try to write translations.
Its hard to read hindhi for me(Non hindhi speaking ppl)
Thank you for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Both chapters were really awesome...
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Chapter 3:

Scene 1:

Aaliya is takinh out the clothes from a tub.

She is trying while Zain comes and helps her.

Aaliya:Koi zaroorat nahi hai mujhe tumhari madat ki...

Aur waise bhi tumhe to the jo mujhe apni zindingi se bahar chahte the? Bolo?

Zain:Jab tum wo maan sakti toh yeh bhi jaan lo ki main tumhe yahan se leker nahi jaane wala...

Aaliya takes the cloth and keeps it on the wire...

Aaliya is about to leave but Zain holds her hand...

And keeps hishand on her petite waist...

Zain:Dekho Maamu ki bhanji...

Aaliya:Zain kya kar rahe ho?

...

Shabana comes b/w them

Shabana:ummm

Yeh chat hai tum dono ka kamre nahi...

Aaliya:Ammi inh janab se kahiye ki door rahe aur haan mujhe tang na kare...

Zain:Phoops ise keh do ki main iska oicha nahin chodne wala

And again slides towards her.

Aaliya:Huh...main ja rahi hoon...

Ammi khana do...

Shabana:Laayi!

Zain tujhe thodi aur mehnat karni padegi

And shabana leaves...

OO meri maamu ki bhaanji tum yeh jaan lo ki tumhare bina meri Zindingi adhoori hai aur tumhare bina main nahi jee sakta...

Scene 2:

At lunch:

Fahad:Aahhha kya khana banaya hai tumne aaliya...

Aaliya:thank fahad bhai...

Arub:Haan chichi kitna tasty hai...you are the best and slowly kisses on her cheeks.

Zain whispers to aaliya:

Yeh to aaj isne paap kar diya...

Yeh tumhare gaal sirf meri kiss ke liye bane hai...

Aaliya is still angry she leaves in anger...

Ammi main thodi der ghar se bahar jaa rahi hoon...mujhe ghootan ho rahi hai..

She said before leaving

Zain:Kaha kaha jaogi maamu ki bhaanji...

Dhundh to main tumh lunga hi...

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Promo:Aaliya in trouble...

Zain comes to save her...

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"Bas dua mein yaad rakhna kyunki...

Day after tomorrow I have an exam"

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Cute n superb update
Update next part ASAP
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