Amazing Ann. This was beautifully penned down "Zain Abdullah had left nothing behind." Except memories... My heart sank though I didn't cry. And this time, I am here to fulfill your wish. A critisism 😆 Well not exactly. Itt is just formatting. Can you use spaces between dialouges or something? Cause Ivwas reading rehan khan.. I have never met any friends of hers. I had to read firse to understand ye kisne bola. Pls koi offence mat lena.
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It was really good, u're a really gifted writer, but i really hope nothing such happen in real BI, wouldn't wanna see aaliye with rehan, but yours was great 😊
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