Originally posted by: Zaya.priyanka
well written saheba...
What will happen today??? how will aaliya break zain's hope?? will it be the truth of their divorce or something new all together.. 😲
Originally posted by: musicxolover
Oh my goodness, this is amazing :D It was very well-written!
First of all, I loved how you kept switching their POV's.And these lines, seriously brought tears to my eyes:"I want you to come back home with me", Zain finally answered. Aaliya was about to respond back when Zain continued, " I want to go back to the way we were. Of course this time stronger...so strong that nothing can come in between us, so strong that we will be able to face anything together."His pain, his longing and his remorse was portrayed so well here in this paragraph :)Loved the way you penned down Aaliya's struggle with herself and the way you described her wanting to break down in front of Zain.My poor ZaYa 😭 Oh, and this line! I loved this line so much!You left it on a cliffhanger. -____________- My only complaint! :PGirl, you're an awesome writer ❤️ Can't wait to read more from you!!
Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
Oh my! Im late, i didn't know you wrote something recently, why no PM?
Originally posted by: -Saheba-
oh I'm so sorry Avi LOL i forgot about sending PMs -_-But thank you very much 😳
Originally posted by: -Saheba-
that is exactly what i meant and thank you for addressing this really 😃
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