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Saheba that was so good, girl why'd you stop?!
Ugh this OS makes my heart hurt for Zain and Aliya, it's unfair that life treated them so illy, they deserve some happiness (and so do we lol)But amazing OS dear!!
Originally posted by: uttaranfanfoe
Beautifully written! I loved how Aliya explained her feelings about that hotel night and the jungle night! I'm so terrified that this is what will happen today.. I can't bear to see Zain break down now.. 😭
Please continue if you can!
Originally posted by: Ilovezaya
It's really beautifully written 😊
The way u expressed thier feelings was explained so nicely
Update soon so that we can see how this story progresses
👏 👏 👏
Originally posted by: ..Ramya..
Loved it!
" I want to go back to waking up every morning and watch you dry your hair after taking a shower. I want to go back to sharing the same breakfast table with you. I want to go back to kissing you on the cheek every morning before I go to work. I want to go back to sharing the same bed with you wrapped in my arms in our room. The room that we decorated together-"This was my favourite part of the OS, Zain letting out his feelings, reliving all those moments, I literally had a sequence of flash backs going on my head while reading this (except there was no bg music lol). I could feel what ZaYa were feeling and only a good writer can make a reader feel that way, so without doubt ur an amazing writer. Plz pm me if u can and keep writing!
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