zaya ss: Soulmates, last chapter

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Soulmates
Chapter 1

Hello guys, here is a short story on zaya, these days I'm suffering with zaya obsession so that's y im.writing what ever that is coming to my mind. pls read it and let me know whether I shud continue it or not.

Aliya checked into hotel, walking hurriedly talking over phone. She bumped into someone, she closed her eyes getting scared, pair of strong arms caught her from falling down. Aliya opened one eye to check where she is. She saw a pair of eyes looking at her in confusion. Aliya got up composed herself and raised her index finger to warn. Zain held her finger and bent it down. Aliya's anger reached maximum point and she started yelling at him. "How.dare u touch me" zain raised his hand and sighed her to stop. Leave it pretty lady, I should have let u falling down, sorry for saving u, saying that zain just walked out.
Aliya's anger reached boiling point, she turned back stamping her leg to floor furiously. She realised she is in short of time and started running towards her room. Grabbed her bag which was on bed, locked her room and checked out .

Zain got into bus, took a windows seat and closed his eyes trying to relax. After.few min he opened his eyes and started searching for Rizwaan. He scanned bus and found Rizwaan sitting 4 rows back to zain ,beside a girl, flirting with her. Zain thought it's of no use to talk with him at this point. He asked driver what's the departure time, waiting for a passenger, she might be coming, we called her, will start in 5 -10 min said driver. Aliya got into bus saying sorry to driver for being late. The moment she got in to bus zain caught her attention, she ignored him giving him fiercing look and walked inside. She went her seat and found Rizwaan sitting in her seat. She said it's my seat. Rizwaan got up from seat and pleaded her to sit in his seat. She agreed and asked him where it is rizwaan pointed a seat beside zain. Aliya curtly said I cannot sit beside that HEAD CASE. Rizwaan pleaded her saying zain is his friend and he is very good. Aliya agreed and went towards zain. She stood near zain. Zain looked at her with questioning eyes. Aliya asked him to sit in next seat. Excuse me , hello this is my seat said zain blankly. I know but ur friend sat in my windows seat and he asked me to sit here said aliya smirking at him. Zain got up and looked at rizwaan and found he is busy in talking. Not even looking at zain. Zain got irritated and on top of it this pretty bitch's smirk is testing his patience. Zain shifted to next seat mumbling God how can I travel sitting beside this... Aliya gave him an angry look which made zain to swallow the word which he was abt to spit. she taunted him saying thank god u accepted if not full journey I shud looking at ur stupid face, now atleast I can peep outside and enjoy the weather. She tried to get into her seat crossing him, she stamped his leg with her heel purposely and sat beside him comfortably. Ouch u BLOODY SCREW BALL shouted zain in pain. Aliya gave a small victorious smile, zain thought she is a GONE CASE and tried to maintain distance from MASKED WITCH, yes witch masked with Beautifull and innocent face. Aliya suddenly got up and asked driver, when can we reach destination. I mean how many hours does it take to reach ladhak. 6 hours answered driver." 6 hours" repeated zain, god this is going to be a horrid journey save me. Aliya tried to relax closing her eyes. Zain mumbled to himself I never knew that even devils take rest. This is going to be a horrendous trip, how can I tolerate 4 days wit this horrid crazy monster.

Zain and aliya are heading to Ladhak on an adventurous trip. It includes site seeing, trekking fiests etc. Aliya Gulamv haider daughter of Gulam. She is fun loving screw ball. At times she behaves like a high spirited horse which no one can control. Little mischievous but a sensible girl with loving heart. Zain completed his MS and returned to India. Before getting engrossed into work, he planned to go r for an adventurous trip. So zain and his friend Rizwaan came together.

A few minutes later Aliya opened her eyes and thrilled to see mountains completely covered with snow, they are at the bottom of mountains and they are going to reach top of mountain this thought itself made her more excited. Aliya turned to face zain and saw that he is struggling to have view of outside scenery. Aliya planned to irritate him bcz she heard him calling her monster when she was resting. She folded her legs turned completely to the window side shielding almost 3/4th window with her petite body preventing zain to have look at outside view and started looking out dreamily ,Zain's anger reached peaks and he said loudly ODD BALL, all he can see is aliya's back that's it, look at her sitting like a Monster with her free hair facing window zain thought to himself. Thinking about oddity of situation he shook his head with amusement uttering ODD MONSTER.

That's all guys, waiting for feed back, pls hit like button if u like it and comment pls😊
Pls let me know whether I shud continue it or not

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Construction problem didn't plan properly, engineer (me) was indeed bad
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Index
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