BHULA DENA MUJHE--(THIRD CHALLENGE){Part1 nd Part 2( pg5) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
love love it .. updated the 2nd part sooon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2 (teaser)
( 1 week later)

The remote rattled and clanked onto the floo.As silence fell upon her,the sound coming from the televison slowly faded away ,it was as if she was being pulled into an abyss of muted darkness."Aliya ajj raat ko--"Shabana never got the chance to complete what she had meant to say.She halted in front of her daughter,who stood motionless,staring blankly at the TV screen."Aaliya beti--kya hua hai tujhe--Itni khoyi khoyi si kyun lag rahi hai?Aaliya--?"
"Ammi-Z-Zain --:Her chest constricted and suddenly the lack of air in her lungs made her deel claustrophobic."Z-Zain.."
"Haan -Zain? Kya hua hai usse?Aur tu ab tak!Aaliya-beete hue kal ko jitni jaldi bhul a degi utne hi jaldi tu zindagi mei aage bar payegi..." "Nahi A-Ammi..Z-Zain is in d-danger...mujhe jaana...""Alaiya tu kahi nahi jayegi." "Aaliya aap kahan jaane ki baath kar rahi hai..?" "Shukr hai Rehaan ke tum aa gaye...dekho na.Aaliya hai ki meri baat manne ko tyaar nahi hai!" "Aaliya moved around the room,with staggering steps,hastily collecting her purse and mobile,and she slowly began retreating from the room.."Aaliya tujhe meri kasam tu kahi nahi jayegi..Aaliya!"
She stopped at the doorway.
"Ammi aaj agar aap khuda ko bhi lakar mere samne khada kar denge,toh nai unse ladne ke liye bhi tyaar hoon..."
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Hey guys don't be angry..its just a teaser..will update the entire chapter very soon...!

From
Ann



PS: Guys can you all guess what has happened to Zain or the kind of problem that he's in?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

🥺 humara dil todne mein mazza ata hai tumhe?
However good this peice was, I really do not want it to happen in the show at any cost.
But I am pretty sure I will enjoy it. 😆
And I'll let you know bout the other thing soon.
If you come around to writing it, I am sure it will be a treat.
This one is amazing 😃
But I don't think I have heard this song :P kaunsa hai??


Kya karu Sanika..thodi devilosh hoon na!😉Bt u can'r help but acknowledge that I almost ALWAYS except once..I ALWAYS GIVE HAPPY ENDINGS!Thkx!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
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this seems interesting
Edited by zaya-firdose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Interesting teaser
eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
I cannot believe I wrote piece as peice.
Apologies.
I bet he did a Ashuiqi 2 and is ready to jump of the Vashi bridge 🤣
Actually, hyd mein nai rahega,so hyd. Bridge :P
Or kidnapped.
Ya accident.
There are a million possibilities.
Update.
Finally Aliya ne shabana ke khilaf awaz uthaya. Thank god.
Update fast.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Ohhh god it was so heart touching!!
U literally made me cry!! 😭

Brilliant piece of work dear!! 👏
Update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Part 1 was so emotional
I'm literally still crying
That was so heartbreaking
Aawww my poor Zain..
Teaser was also really good
Can't wait to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
Looking forward to the next part eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Ohhk now u making us wait more and more update fast
..and ya I am sort of teacher ... I am doing law so together with law for passing time I teach kids :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Eeeks! I almost had a heart attack after reading part one! Now part two teaser has relieved me a bit.. I really hope something like this happens in the show! Do update! I loved it so much..
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