BHULA DENA MUJHE--(THIRD CHALLENGE){Part1 nd Part 2( pg5)

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(PART 1)
"Do kasauti par kar chuka hoon main--abb teeesari ki baari--tumne mujhe bataya nahi third challenge kys hai--"He crept up behind her as she was cooking in the dabha.
She turned to face him-"nahi kar paoge tum Zain"
"main tumhe paane ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tyaar hoon..."
She looked back into his eyes,their gaze interwined the way it used to...
"Mujhe meri zindagi waapas de sakte ho?Mujhe jeene hi ek nayi umeed de sakte ho?Madad kar sakte ho mujhe ,taki main Zain Abdullah ko apni yadoon se mita sakoo--madad kar sakte ho,taki mujhe roz subah utke un lmaho ko phirse jena na pade..kar sakte ho yeh sab? Chale jaa sakte ho..meri zindagi se--humesha humesha ke liye...taki mujhe mere ankhon ke samne meri zidagi ko tabah hone se bacha saku..."

Fragments of thought, splinters of words, and droplets of silence spun into a kaleidoscopic jumble, shifted infinitesimally, and fell into an incredible new pattern.
"Haan.."
For a split second she wished he had said 'no' instead..because she knew that if he resolved to do something,he would then surely get it done..
"Tum chahte ho ki main tumse door chala jao-taki tum mujhe bhulakar phirse zindagi shuru kar sako ki-kisi aur ke sa-saath..chahti ho ki main humesha humesha ke liye--"
"Haan..main yahi chahti hoon..."
Silence was like a poisonous air that at any moment would choke the life out of them...always lingering and following them and their thoughts...
"Aaliya -shayad yeh akhri mulaakat aur alvida bhi hai-ek cheez maang sakta hoon tumse...ek akhri muraad?"
"Kya?"
She stiffened as she felt his hands on her shoulder.."Akhri baar tumhe chu sakta hoon...?"
Her body relaxed and unbidden tears fell shamelessly from her eyes,as he hugged her from behind..the warmth of his body seeped into hers and for a moment she felt at peace...until the haunting memories and the state of their relationship,came rumbling back to her.
She was jolted back into reality as his arms left her..she turned around to face him...he gently wiped the stray tears from her cheeks...

"Ajeeb batat haina?maine tumhe waada kiya tha ki mian humari yeh kahaani kabhi adhoori nahi chodunga..aur yeh dekho humari kahaani adhoori hi reh gayi Uss din tum mujhe chodd kar jane waali thi...aur aaj main jaa raha hoon..taki tum phirse muskura sako,ek nayi zindagi shuru kar saako...phirse kisi aur se pyaar kar sako...mujhe bhula dena Aaliya..pata hai bauhat mushkil nahi hoga...beintehaa nafrat aur kwaf ke aag mei sari yaadein jal kar khak ho jayegi...Take care of yourself aur meri Mamu Ki Bhanji ka bhi khyaal rakna..kyunki mujhe pata hai ki woh humare yadoon mei humseha zinda rahegi..Allah Hafiz..Aaliya..."

Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina

Ho teri saari shoharatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhi pe saari rehamatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

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This was part 1 od Bhula Dena...Part 2 will be updated soon!Hope you guys liked it.please comment..and let me know your views..!take care guys!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
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unres
well emoted
emotional
oh god
I will die within a second
if this is the third challenge
thanks for pm
continue soon
really heart touching 😭
Edited by zaya-firdose - 10 years ago
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Update fast I hate cliffhangers and one more think pls make them one I can't see them separate pls. ...
Loved it and some tears welled up my eyes
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Ohhk I am officially the first one
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its really a emotional part.you write it so well.plz update part 2 soon.thanks for pm.
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I loved it to the core. Just update soon. Why I think there is a high possibility that this will he Aliya's third challenge.Anyways you are a beautiful writer πŸ‘
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OH GOD DIS SO HEART WRENCHING update i love d way zain said last tym i wnt to touch u nd he hugs her frm bck oh so sad i cnt see dis in d shw i cnt i'll cry buckets i wnt my zaya togeder i wnt dem togeder no more separation ..bt u made an exceptional story i give a salute u write so well u understand nd potray emotions so well
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Its really nyc ann very emotional plzzz update soon i m eagerly waiting
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Originally posted by: katmaan

Update fast I hate cliffhangers and one more think pls make them one I can't see them separate pls. ...

Loved it and some tears welled up my eyes


Just wait nd watch Khyati Mam..(I heard dat u r a teacher!) Nd they will be together nd u'll hve 2 see what happens next!
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

its really a emotional part.you write it so well.plz update part 2 soon.thanks for pm.


Thank u so much!😊
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