The Carpet- OneShot ZaYa - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
it was fabulous!!!😳..very well written👏..truly loved it.❤️.thank u so much for d pm..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
its sooo beautiful os
totally luved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hey thanks for the PM ! I really wish there's a second part to this beautiful story and u turn it into a TwoShot! I simply love how u always keep it realistic😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
ohhh wow it was fantastic
i love it sooo much
i love ur writing beautiful😳😳
keep ur brilliant work
and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Hey!!
Thanks a ton for this OS! Just simply loved it. It was so refreshing to read it!

I am guessing the girl from the school is Aliya?
Anyhow, please continue soon!
Love
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Thank you so much for all your responses. Truly appreciate them all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Also, the girl at the beginning wasn't Aaliya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Reserved!
I promise I'll leave a review tomorrow after coming back from school 😳
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Wow buddy. This is excellent! A serious one but realistic. And of courseee, you wrote it down brilliantly.
You write so well , i mean like HOW?😛
Yes, and the plot was amazing. Completely in love with it !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nondescript

Also, the girl at the beginning wasn't Aaliya.


Really?
Now that you have told us, I am all the more eager to read ahead.
Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Is this another idea for a FF??? this is amazing! which all of your work are.. can we get a one shot if not a FF with Aliya's pov?? 😳 love reading your works 😊🤗
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