The Carpet- OneShot ZaYa

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Posted: 10 years ago
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NYC please continue 😊
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awesome one shot 👏
i like zain charcater and his profession.I really like their conversation.
please continue it if you can.

There comes a time in one's life when it hits you. That one excruciating yet completely lucid moment when the realization hits you that you need to stop; you need to stop frolicking around and pull yourself together. Through the haze of the Class A and the dulling of the liquid luck', it was merely a murmur, but seeing your brother's dead body and seeing what rendered his end, it finally opened the blinded eye.
I love these lines, they have so deep meaning and are wonderfully written.
Edited by Javeria3991 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's awesome
totally I loved it
beautifully penned down
hats off
amazing os
beyond perfect
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED IT! :D
Thanks for PMing me. This is another faab piece you've written- so unusual and just amazing. Sad for Abdullah's for having to go through that and losing Fahad- Suicide is never the answer.'

Q: Did either of them realize that they know each other from back then.. I was awaiting that part .. but I guess it never clicked in.. or the one that called him broody 'wasn't Aaliya?

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Originally posted by: hilly

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">LOVED IT! :D
Thanks for PMing me. This is another faab piece you've written- so unusual and just amazing. Sad for Abdullah's for having to go through that and losing Fahad- Suicide is never the answer.'

Q: Did either of them realize that they know each other from back then.. I was awaiting that part .. but I guess it never clicked in.. or the one that called him broody 'wasn't Aaliya?

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Hey Hilly!
Thank You so much :-)
Aaliya wasn't the one who called him Broody, just a random other girl.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is fabulous
Continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant update, loved each and every line,
Thanks.for pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is brilliant di!
I always loved your work.

There comes a time in one's life when it hits you. That one excruciating yet completely lucid moment when the realization hits you that you need to stop; you need to stop frolicking around and pull yourself together. Through the haze of the Class A and the dulling of the liquid luck', it was merely a murmur, but seeing your brother's dead body and seeing what rendered his end, it finally opened the blinded eye.


These lines are too emotional di.
Loved the way you portray each and every word.
Thank you so much di for the pm.

P.S.- I just saw you are a lot older than me. I am 18 and you and 23. So today onwards I am going to call you di. Hope you don't mind. And even if you do, sorry can't help it! :P

-Tanya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its awesome as always i just read the last part of ur ROUTES that was also awesome
update soon
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