Karnas Vow OS [DELETED FROM HERE!]

Another beautiful story on Karna!
Really interesting beginning.👏
I'm surprised by your choice of Supriya and I loved reading this story. You've got the right flow of words!⭐️

Really nice beginning ..Would love to read it further...do continue soon ..

Nice start sis👍🏼

Very Beautiful OS on Karna's vow. 👍🏼

Ur take on Supriya was a bit surprising but the nonetheless it was very sweet & matured description of Supriya in ur story. 😊
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"No wonder how strong a man is he has to fear his wife! It is his must do duty!!!"... 🤣 🤣

Update ur next OS soon. Will be waiting for it.

Is you name Sanskruti? 😃

Why did u say you are no writer you write brilliantly!!!😊

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

Another beautiful story on Karna!

Thanks
Really interesting beginning.👏

Thanks so much I was a bit scared before posting it!!

I'm surprised by your choice of Supriya

Actually many here on IF including you have a brilliant job on Vrushu, also Sawant Sir in MJ have done a brilliant job on her... But Supriya and Karna just have one small conversation in MJ rest they do all eye talking!! so I thought she need his love back She is sweet, inocent and shy I love her she is me😳

and I loved reading this story. You've got the right flow of words!⭐️

Thanksss🤗 you don't know what your these words mean😃

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Originally posted by: shweta2728

Very Nice! Please continue!

Thank you😃

I will update soon😊

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Originally posted by: riti4u

Really nice beginning .

Thanks😃

.Would love to read it further..

Thanks so much I was a bit scared before posting it!!

.do continue soon ..

I will update soon😃

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Originally posted by: panchaali

Nice start sis👍🏼

Thanks Dii🤗

The story title itself is very catchy...👏

I promise donating alms selflessly. The one visiting wont go empty handed I wont think twice before giving what he wants Oh Suryadev, be my witness and bless me with your everlasting glory!" The sun beamed upon his face, his gaze was locked onto the golden disc and suddenly the sun shined brightly then ever & threw its golden rays on his disciple as if blessing him which made his Kavach and Kundals shine brightly they reflected an intense light that would blinden one's eyes

this part is very nice👍🏼

Moving forward towards his chamber his mind recalled one incidence with this best friend Duryodhana he had laughed when Duryodhan said to him,"No wonder how strong a man is he has to fear his wife! It is his must do duty!!!"..."Its true", he admitted to himself...as he approached his chamber he could imagine the Durgamata avtar of his most introvert and polite wife Supriya!

ha ha very true 🤣

You did quote my Favorite lines!!😊

plzzz continue 😊

I will continue soon... I was a bit scared b4 posting it!😊

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Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Very Beautiful OS on Karna's vow. 👍🏼

Thanks this motivates me!!😃😃

Ur take on Supriya was a bit surprising but the nonetheless it was very sweet & matured description of Supriya in ur story. 😊

My Supriya is sweeter than sugar!!...but in Next part I am planning her naughty and mischievous😳

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"No wonder how strong a man is he has to fear his wife! It is his must do duty!!!"... 🤣 🤣

Update ur next OS soon. Will be waiting for it.

Will soon update!!😃😃😃

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