Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower
This update is F.A.N.T.A.S.T.I.C
Outstanding
Loved and enjoyed this update
~My favourite scene ~
Passage no. 21
Saif was Adamant, he asked sarah to get down they both started fighting for their Arm chair... Aliya's lap is their favourite Arm chair they always fight for it... when ever they fight an acute pain touches Aliy's heart, bcz if zain was with them his lap would be their another favourite arm chair... Twins don't need to fight for this, it would have been perfect...
~My favourite dialogue~
" Zain, giving those white roses and seeking for forgiveness, it means a lot to me only, I dnt believe in people giving me white Rose when they are seeking my forgiveness, bcz it's nothing to them, they jus know those Roses are my favourite...that's it, and they give me to convince me soon...
Continue soon
The end of this chap is perfect
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