zaya ff: Teri meri love story chapter 16update page 127 tiny dose - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
***unres***
So sorry Madhu... I know I am super late this time... but I had so much to do yesterday... abhi free hoyi. But perhne say pehle nhi soyi. See, how loyal a fan & friend I am πŸ˜›
I felt so bad for the entire ZaYa family.
Zain because he is too adamant that he loves Sanam... he's hurting inside, but he won't admit... not even to himself... u are so right to call him a phattu
Aliya because she is explicitly aware of her feelings for him... knows her presence affects him, but she is bound by the promise... she has to keep her end of the bargain... she has to return Zain to sanam! If only Zain was an object...
For Sarah and Saif because despite having a father, they have been deprived of fatherly love and care since before they were born... because their father never knew about them... I wonder how Zain would react to this shocking yet beautiful discovery... looking forward to the confrontation... whenever it may be.
Loved them saving each other's numbers as minnie and gem... so cute
I so didn't expect Rehaan to see them kiss... more like Zain kissing and Aaliya pushing him away. Anyway, this part made me laugh at my own reaction πŸ˜†
The apology part was really good... Aaliya not accepting the white roses saying these mean a lot to her, but nothing to Zain... a perfectly legit reason, then Zain trashing those away was funny too, but more cute 😊 he meant the apology and she accepted... that's the understanding I so adore.
Saif is so cute, how can I ever hate him for anything... not even if he's disturbing Aaliya's thoughts of the past that I was so enjoying reading about... but I am now looking forward to the kids' bonding with Zain... these adorable little kids and their hottie dad enjoying their new found friendship and fondness for each other 😊
Sarah is so clever, and jal kukray tou dono bhai behen hai... adorbs!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

I don't have words to praise

Sorry
Iam speechless πŸ˜”
Each and every word I used
To praise u
Nothing left to πŸ€”

πŸ˜†
Dnt praise
Mention which.part u liked πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Your dp "OKA LAILA KOSAM"😳🀣

Kadhu, ye maya chesavaπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Chudails, I too don't know read some whereπŸ˜›, so I added it in my ffπŸ˜†
Let's not discuss this, mai Bahuth shareef huuu...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

Lol.. we three are self proclaimed shareefs πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waah yaar...
Such an amazing update...
Loved it...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

I am firstπŸ₯³

But last to unres... chorry * kaan pakhad ke *
Amazing update
Awesome fabulous fantabulous superb n everything else
U are a commendable writer
Aww Zain realized his mistake
N phattu Zain is back πŸ˜†
Zain bring Aaliya white roses was a good gesture but later him throwing that n asking sorry was too good
Proud of my Zain
Zaya saving each other's no as Minnie n gem was so sweet
I actually should hate saif for disturbing Aaliya but he is soo cute that maaf kiya
The present was cuteness overloaded
I absolutely loved it
Continue soon
I seriously can't wait to read Zains

Commendable writer😲,
LolπŸ˜† thank u
Phattu zain is back, but he is going to loose his phattuness πŸ€ͺ
White roses.part, thank.u, I actually feels that way when someone brings my fav to pacify me, πŸ˜›
I used it hereπŸ˜›, and I love White roses for some reasons
Cuteness overloaded thank u dear
Love u so much for lovely lovely comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved each and every single part
Yaar
And yes I know it's ye maaya chesave
But thought maybe oka laila KOSAM
Awesome update


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

Waah yaar...

Such an amazing update...
Loved it...
Continue soon

Thank u so much😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: clover1231

It was as always fabulous but I'm not getting how all this happened and how these twins came

May be clue will be there in nxt chapter
And I'm happy as u r regularly updating πŸ‘

Twins, they came that's itπŸ˜† full. Credit goes to zain babaπŸ˜†
Thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: katmaan

Omg omg omg such beautiful ...update darling

Thank u Kyati😳
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