Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
Now unres this only when she unres yours.
😆
Reserved 😛
Edited*
Unres.
Avi, you sadist. I know i am a sadist😆
I love you 😉 i love you too!
I love the fact that zain remembered about Aliya even while taking his last breath. Arent they each others?ye feeling aana chahiye na?😛
Loved how he always reciprocates her "Zain" with his "Aliya".
Absolutely loved the line "She left his hand when hope left her"
That was the show stealer.awww! Thank you! You know how i feel now? Im akmost flying.
Somehow conveying that her Zain and hope were the same.
I loved the one shot. Thank You!😳
Think twice befor you say I am not a writer. I'll be on the warpath. See! You did not identify ANY mistake?😕 because i found it when i read once now! I left a whole line! Due to which the feeling of Zain started without any proper continuation from their dialogues!
You are an amazing one. Im inspired from an amazing person like you!
Keep writing varna qatal kar dungi. You're AWESOME Sanika! Love you to the coreee now!THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
-Sanika
Originally posted by: Barbievishi20
Lack if words 😭
Love is eternal...
Khud Hafiz Aliya ... that was so heart touching ❤️😭
Well written...
Avi you are amazing writer 👍🏼
Keep writing 👍🏼
Thankyou so much for PM 🤗
Waise All the best 👍🏼
Tc 😳
Originally posted by: anaghazaya
Brilliantly penned down!!
Especially he saying khuda hafiz was way too touching
Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-
Avi this is soo wonderful mann! Tujhe kuch chahiye?ice kyu laga rahi hai?
I thought Zain will get hit by a car and then you'll give me some funny dialogues from his side. Im Farhan part two.LOL. I never knew ke you're a sadist. Im more than you 😆 a bigger Sadist i am. I though I'm the only one 😛 but he died. Omg, man it was amazing. I loved it when Zain was thinking about how will she live without him. Oh mann this is soo emotional and beautiful <3
I love you Hermain! This review was AWWEESSOMEE! Thank You sooo much!I loved it! Esp because it was sad na :P Sadist!
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