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Avii

@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: simran422
Res! But will unres soonn :)
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It was so heart touching and emotional
I am crying 😭😭 Dont Cry! 😭😃
Poor aliya!
That khuda hafiz word killed me 😭
So very well written avi! Thank You!
Loved it..
I'm speechless.. Oh My God! Thank You Thank You!
Awesome!

P.S. I hate you for killing zain not really😆
thank you for writing this Os! Thanks to mujhe kehna chahiye! 🤗

I dont know why! Simran but i am literally jumping now! Thank You SOO much Dear!

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Brilliantly penned down!!

Especially he saying khuda hafiz was way too touching

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

unresd on page 3 😎

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 10 years ago

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simran422

@simran422

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

I dont know why! Simran but i am literally jumping now! Thank You SOO much Dear!

Believe me Avi it was so beautiful and heart touching!

Keep it up dear!😊

Hugss 🤗🤗

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Avi this is soo wonderful mann!

I thought Zain will get hit by a car and then you'll give me some funny dialogues from his side. I never knew ke you're a sadist. I though I'm the only one 😛 but he died. Omg, man it was amazing. I loved it when Zain was thinking about how will she live without him. Oh mann this is soo emotional and beautiful <3

I loved it! Esp because it was sad na :P

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divikash

@divikash

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

adadada...superba irunduchu

i really liked it, how could you say it was crap...i really liked it

keeping writing such OS often but i'll read it every weekend😃

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Aww Avi such an emotional update, u made me cry dear

Those last words😭

Brilliant update dear, loved each and every line

Keep writing

Thank u so much pm

P.s. U r heartless u made our zain die😭 ha ha juss kidding ,loved it

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Sanika

@Legilimens

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-
Avi this is soo wonderful mann!
I thought Zain will get hit by a car and then you'll give me some funny dialogues from his side. I never knew ke you're a sadist. I though I'm the only one😛but he died. Omg, man it was amazing. I loved it when Zain was thinking about how will she live without him. Oh mann this is soo emotional and beautiful <3

I loved it! Esp because it was sad na :P

Mujhe bhul gayi Hermy?

I am a sadist too man.
Unresed.on page one.
I am not a late lateef like you.
Don't let vinu read this. She'll kill you 😆
Happy Onam 😃 😃

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Flower

@ZFA_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Why the hell didn't he listened to Aliya's word

Stupid Zain

I feel so much sadness for Aliya

And her Allah will help her with everything.As Zain was there before,but now the responsibility goes to Her Allah.She was 'Allah Ki Ladli'

These words literally touched my heart

It is very emotional but still I feel refresh after reading this OS

And now I am crying with a smile and I don't know why the hell am I smiling my be because I was feeling gratitude for Aliya because she is indeed a very strong lady and of course Allah ki ladli

Edited by sazebuna - 10 years ago

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