ZaYa FF: Our Destiny (Unfinished abruptly) - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This update is W.O.N.D.E.R.F.U.L
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What did the last line mean Zubair is taking advantage of Aliya
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Thanks for the pm and answering my questions :)
Hope u are feeling better now
It was a little shorter compared to the previous ones (I get why), but nice nonetheless
So today it was more oofAayat and Shabana, Aayat is justified in her place, she just wants to make sure Zain doesn't repeat that horrible mistake again... that he doesn't hurt her sister ever again, Shabana isn't wrong either, Zain has suffered enough already, he has realized what he did was wrong, and that he should have never done that in the first place... it's like both of them are right, it's more of a clash of different opinions, very realistic. So, I kinda liked that :)
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Chapter 13

Zubbair : Look Aliya its not the right time to stay and think. You have to...I mean you are in a situation to run for your life...L.I.F.E

Aliya : But Zubbair...

Zubbair : So tell me are you going to stay here until he comes and catch you? Teel me Aliya...come on tell me...

Aliya : Lemme think Zubbair.

Zubbair : Do something befre its too late Aliya. That's all That's all can say you right now.

Aliya looked up to Zubbair's face and she can see nothing. He was blank. She thought to herself that even Zubbair is not in a situation to think. Aliya made up her mind and she spoke out finally after the long silence

Aliya : Ok do you have any plan?

Zubbair : (Yes, Yes, I know this will happen. After all I am your cousin I know you better Aalu) Me...me...I don't have a plan...yea...why don't we move out somewhere else?

Aliya : Move out???

Zubbair : I mean go somewhere he may not find you.

Aliya : If Zain is In love he an even search out of grave.

Zubbair raised his eyebrow.

Aliya : So where?

Zubbair : (Monologue) I wish Aayat could hear this.

Aliya : I asked you something na!!

This voice shook him up from his dream land.

Zubbair : Haan haa Aliya I have...I thought...I think...I mean.

Aliya : What I...I...I...What have you thought?

Zubbair : I Yea...I thought... We will move on to...to...some picnic spot.

Aliya : What!!??? Picnic spot??

Zubbair : Yes, he will never search you there.

Aliya : Wait I am totally off now...but will regain my sense back. So be careful.

Zubbair : How wouldn't I know that Aalu?

Aliya packed her small travelling bag while Zubbair took all his bags. They both came out the of the house. Aliya locked it behind and walked towards the car with Zubbair. She safely kept the bag behind and climbed up the car with her luggage. Zubbair took the first seat and he was off the compound wall.

Aliya : Where are we going?

Zubbair : I don't know...but we will land somewhere trust me.

Aliya : Umm...(Whatever)

Aliya was not even sure about her feelings, about her love, about all, about the whole WORLD. She felt asleep in few minutes.

Zubbair : Aliya, what were you doing in that school?

Zubbair looked in the mirror and found her asleep. Zubbair smiled and took out his mobile and called someone.

Zubbair : Just pick up...pick up...pick up...

He then texted "I am with Aliya. Where to go?"

Few minutes later he got a reply.

"Hotel at Mumbai. Make sure the room is..."

He texted back.

"Don't worry. Its done."

He smiled and drove off.

Precap : Zain : (At phone) Where? In Mumbai?




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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 9 years ago
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