ZaYa FF: Our Destiny (Unfinished abruptly) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update!!!!
very well written..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm, sorry couldn't read earlier, but read ch 9 - 11 all in one go. Ok so Aayat is testing Zain, but why can't Zain fly their? It's not like, "it's bus or nothing" there's train, airplane, so many modes of transportaion.
Hope they meet soon :(

Did Zubair in ur story ever aid suri in separating ZaYa?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 10 & 11 were just awesome yaar
Loved it
Really ayat urghh
Continue ASAP
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Chapter 12

Aayat turned and shocked to see Shabana behind her.

Aayat : Ammi ...

Shabana : Whats all this Aayat?

Aayat : Ammi...I ...I

Shabana : I...I ...What? What have you done with Zain?

Aayat : Nothing Ammi...just I told a lie.

Shabana : Do you know how much Zain is hurt?

Aayat : Do you have any Idea how Appi was hurt?

Shabana : Aayat past is past.

Aayat : How can we forget that Ammi? After all Appi is your daughter...your own daughter...

Shabana : I understand Aayat.

Aayat : No Ammi...you don't understand and you never will...

Shabana : Aayat...

Aayat : Ammi...(Crying) you know how appi was shattered by his words...Have he ever regretted his mistake? No right? He just want Appi...Ammi open your ears...He just want Appi...

Shabana : No Aayat...its not like that...he loves her...

Aayat : Then how did he stay without her all these months?

Shabana : Aayat each question dosent have an answer.

Aayat : So each action dosent need any explanation.

Shabana : Now you see how shattered he is...

Aayat : Did you see then how shattered appi was?

Shabana : Aayat this is not the time to fight and show ego.

Aayat : Ok I am out of this. I wont help him any more nor stop him from going.

Shabana : Aayat ...listen.

Aayat : Only I will handle everything in my appi's side.

Shabana : Aayat...its not the point of...wait...Do you know where Aliya is?

Aayat : Yes, I know.

Shabana : Then tell Zain na...

Aayat : Why should I?

Shabana : You know...Aliya wont forgive you for doing all this. She too loved Zain very much.

Aayat : ...6 months back.

Shabana : See Aayat...talk with Zain once and tell him what you want. Don't keep him in dark.

Saying this Shabana left the room leaving crying Aayat behind.

Aayat took a photo of Aliya and hugged it tight.

Aayat : Apii...Appi see Ammi is scolding me...

Soon later she wiped her tears and picked up her mobile phone.

Place : Pune

Aliya is not in a mood to go out. Not even to work..She seems so depressed. Then she heard the door open and close. She turned.

Aliya : What happened?

Zubbair : I think Zain reached here.

Aliya : What?

Zubbair : Yea, now only I saw him passing by in a car.

Aliya : Oh my God.

Zubbair : Aliya I have no idea what will he do if he sees you here.

Aliya : Oh my God... ...What will I do now...I think he guessed that I am here...

Zubbair : Do you wanna get outta here?

Aliya is confused and she had no idea what to do...

Zubbair : If you wanna get outta here I may help you.

Aliya is left speechless and Zubbair is taking advantage of Aliya's situation and urging her to move out with him.

Precap : Aliya and Zubbair travelling in a car. Aliya is asleep and Zubbair texting.

P.S : It's a short update. Will try to make the other update big.

Ouestions by UN neenzz

Why cant Zain Fly there?

To make the situation difficult Due to Fog Airport is closed.

Did Zubair in ur story ever aid suri in separating ZaYa?

Yes, but justifying that as time passed by Aliya forgive him. I mean She is facing more problems nowadays so she has no time to think the past and fire at someone. And she is not ready to think back at her path.

Hope all are having a great time reading.

Sorry for the late update. I was down sick. Now I am feeling much better. Hope to update regularly.

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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
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Unres
Interesting
Thank god SHABANA did right
So now maybe zain can find aliya ASAP 👏
Edited by zaya-firdose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was awesome...
Shabana ne pehli baar kuch sahi kiya...
Thanks for pm and continue soon
Edited by iluvuzaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for all your likes and comments on the last chapter.
Index updated.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Pls continue ASAP
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter
First time shabana did something good
Thanx for d pm
Continue soon
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