TS:Rab Ne Bana Di Kiski Jodi Final (collab between me and simran422)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heya folks kaise ho
Sprry i couldnt post on the old one...
Actually me an d simran had diferent stories
But we decided to combine our stories
In which first half is planned by me and second half by simran...
Hope you enjoy it
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PART-2

Raj:Main laila ko airport se hi pick up karne gaya tha...main samjha aap teeno behen itne saal se mile nahi ho...toh acha lagega..aajao sweetheart
Suri (in her mind): Sweetheart...Raj sirf mera sweetheart ho sakta hai...uski-meri oasta jodi hayeee...
BG in her mind:Suraj hua madham...chaand jalne laga Movie:Kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Zarina (in her mind): Laila ki bachi...Raj mera hi sweetheart hai...jab hum dono nikaah karenge humari jodi...hayee...
BG:Mar jaawa...mar jaawa...tere ishq main mar jawa movie:fashion
Laila enters the house...SuriNa pretend to be happy becos of Raj

Suri:Lailaa...meri pyaari behna...welcome to barkat villa
Zari:Laila...Laila tumhe koi andaaza hai ki kitna yaad kar rahi thi main...mashallah kitni pyaari ho tum
Laila:Aap dono se milkar mujhe bhi khushi huwi

Raj gives a forehead kiss to laila amd holds her hand
SuriNa observe...get jealous to the core

In thoughts of Suri
Suri:Kamre mein aao...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Laila: Ji Aapa...
She will throw laila out of her rooms window to swimming pool...
Suri: (shouts) himmat kause huwi raj se nikaah karke...woh mera shahuhar hai BAS!!!

In thoughs of Zari
Zarina mixes poisonous substances to make laila mad...
Zari:Laila...heh lo tumhaara fav juice..peelo
Laila drinks it..zari:Yehi haal hita hai jo raj se pyaar karte hai...kyunki woh mera hai meraa...

Both come to normal senses
Raj:Humara Kamra Waha par hai...chale
Laila:Haa zaroor
BG:Ae Ae Ae Ae with chudail BG...

SuriNa passes thru Rajs room
Laila:Sweetie...kyun na hum ek date par chale
Raj: of fourse...aaj shaam 6:00 PM par jayenge naa...

Suri:Uss Laila ko mein
Zari:Raj ko Sweetie kehlane ka haq sirf mera hai mera...

They do so much plotting but they fail terribly in plan

Suri finds Lailas FB profile
She is posting pics of her and rajs date
Suri throws laptop
Suri:Aaa aaa...lailaaa...lailaaa...lailaaa

Zari finds the same in her laptop
She brings baseball bat and smash the computer...
Zarina:Lailaaa...lailaaa...lailaaa...aaa...

Date of LailAj
Laila:What should we order sweetie
Raj;Pastaa
Laila:Yeah thrs great thing to order...
They will share one piece of pata nad thts lailas profile pic on FB now
BG:Iss Dard e dil ki sifarish...ab karde koi yaha...ki mil jaye ki woh barish movie:yaariyan
They dance together and take selfie over there...
After date...they made their wedding edited video n posted on FB
SuriNa get notifications on FB abt laila...

They message each other
Suri:Kyan tumne woh laila ke FB pics dekhe
Zari:Yes...maine dekha tha
Suri:Uss Manhoos ki itni himmat
Zari:Woh aurat ko mein toh jaan se ,aar dalungi
Suri:Chalo Pasta Gardens mein mikte hai...waha discuss karte hai
Zari:Haa..achaa...wahi milte hai

At Pasta Gardens
Zari:Maine ksi ko organize kiya hai uss manhoos aur raj ke rishtey ko todhne ke liye...Mr.Chakkiwala
Suri:Haa...okay yeh hai mera plan..tumhe yeh sab chup chup ke karna padega
Tumhe Laila Ki Mauth Karni Padegi...
Uske room mein jao...juice mein bangali baaba ka poison milau...usse dedo
Mission accomplish...bas...hogaya...the end...yeh sab kal raat karo...aaj eaat nahi...
Zari:Tu toh master mind nikli surraiya...
Suri:Woh toh main hamesha se hoon

Night time
Oh yeah...did i forget to tell you tht suri has a habit of day dreaming at night time
She finds her self with different kinds of pasta all around...
Her furniture also is made of oasta
Yeh main kaha aagayi hoon??
Usmaan:Chuckles...tum apne hi land mein aayi ho...Pasta Queen Kitchen Land
Suri:Matkab
Usmaan:Tumne mujhe DHOKA DIYAA...DHOKAA...DHOKAAA
Suri:Main kisi ko dhoka nahi deti...
Usmaan:Oh really...
Suri:Haa...dhoka aur main please usmaan saab
Usmaan:im dissapointed kii tum ussi se pyaar karti ho...jisse once upon a time pasta nahi pasand tha...RAJ
Suri:Mujhe sirf pasta se matlqb hai usmaan saab...
Usmaan:Mera kiya Surraiya...Mujhe pasta bachpan se ab tak pasand hai
She realizes her mistake...comes back to normal world

Suri: usmaan saab ko pasta bachpan se pasand tha...aur raj ko abhi abhi junoon pada hai...aur agar mein nikaah karungi...usse pasta ki experience hi nahi hoga...woh pasta waali zindagi

Zarina slowly starts thinking...Raj itna bhi acha nahi hai kynki muje bilal se pyaar hogaya hai...un dono mein zameen aasman farq hai...
BG:Kuch Kuch Hota Hai...Movie:Kich Kuch hota hai

They make Laila-Raj Marry properly and Zarina-Bilal did bhaag kar Nikaah...never to be found

And we all lived happily ever after...
THE END
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What say...kaisa tha
Was it good...
Or a bore...
-Alina and Simran

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WarriorGirl- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahh.. I took 1 hr 15 mins and i get BJKT frm u guys😭😒
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Heyya beautiful girls🤗🤗
Part 2 hilarious [ROFL]
Yeh kya kardala tum logo ne😆
Zari ka nikha bilal se😆
Bechare usmaan mamu suri ne unko bhi nahin baksha😆
My god really can't stop laughing [ROFL]
U guyz made my day n i love u 4 that❤️🤗
I was a little sad today but your romedy made me smile😃
Tnx a ton 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️
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Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa

Ahh.. I took 1 hr 15 mins and i get BJKT frm u guys😭😒


Plz people comment kisi ke efforts ka to khayal rakhna chayee
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Done😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing job Alina And Simran!
I love the second part so much! It was funny and very unpredictable...lol
LMAO and surri's furniture is also made of pasta!! U both are too funny
I really love this, both ur efforts is awesome!!
Keep writing girls this was an awesome job

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Awesome job Alina and Simran this was really hilarious!!! Rofll
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Hilarious !!!! Definitely the most unique story of BI forum . hats off
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🤣
Thanks for the PM
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awesome
hilarious
lmao
really damn funny
alina and simran great job
keep writing more
loved it
thanks for pm
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