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Ayushi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Reserved for all the 3 updates.

-Edited-

This is one Utterly sweet SS. SwaRon meet on a dance show as managers & not as dancers. Their playful conversations & those lovely times that they spend together.

Sharon & Swayam both feel for each other, lovely. Payal, Swayam's bestie made him realize his feeling for some extent. Sharon is at her confused state :D

The end of update 3 was hilarious xD Sharon trying to mess Swayam's hairs, pulling his cheeks, making goofy faces- imaging this made me grin ear to ear :D :D

Oh, how adorable are they!

A date? Now thats a bit soon.

Why did you chose to write a date as Death Sentence? Honestly, that cracked me up xD :D

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

Edited by ayushimehrotra - 9 years ago

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--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Oh,Such a sweet SS. Sharon loves dancing but dont dance professionally. And Swayam is owner of theater. I liked their characters here. Quite different from usual.

I loved their meet.

Sharon & Swayam both feel for each other. Interesting. ! But still confused.

Okay so Date it is.! Looking forward for it.

Dear, you are an awesome writer. I loved the flow in your writing.

Do PM me when update next. Would love to read it.

Keep writing!

-Shivani

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-spongy-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

It was a really nice chapter.
I'm loving this SS. Nice story.
Swayam and Sharon's character is awesome. Really well written.

Please Do update soon. Thanks for the PM.

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Ayushi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

I think you should update this. Waiting for that "death sentenced" date xD

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Rachel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Chapter 4
Sharon fixed her eyes on the changing surroundings. From the corner of her eyes she could see Swayam calmly steering the wheel in front of him. Something about it irked her, maybe it was the fact that he was so calm and she was the complete opposite of it. She focused back outside the window and let out a sigh. Why was he having such an effect on her? One stupid smile of his would bring another stupid smile on her face. There was something definitely different about the relationship they shared. To complicate things more he was taking her out on a date'? Sharon knew the maybe could be a yes or a no, but would she be disappointed if it was a no? It was a huge leap to take just like jumping of Grand Canyon and hoping to land on your feet. Something would obviously change after this.
"I just hope..."
Her thought process was brutally put to a stop by the continuous honking by the person on the driver's seat. Sharon jumped and fixed her eyes on Swayam.
"What the hell Swayam Shekhawat? Why are you honking like a mad man when there is not a single car on the road ahead?" Sharon yelled out of frustration.
Swayam gave her an innocent smile before focussing back on the road.
"You see you have been silent the whole way and you weren't responding so..." he trailed off.
"So? This was your brilliant plan to bring me back to planet earth?"
"Yes" he said immediately.
Sharon just rolled her eyes and focused again on the view outside the window.
"But" she heard him say "This is actually the longest time you have been silent."
She snaps her head in his direction and answers him.
"Do you take me for a chatterbox?"
"No I didn't say that. Is something bothering you?"
"Umm.. No."
"It's about the date, isn't it?"
Sharon just looks at him without even bothering to blink. How can he read her mind? Is he a physic?
"I take your silence as a yes."
Sharon tries to speak but Swayam starts laughing. She rises up her eyebrows and looks at him curiously.
"If you don't stop laughing hysterically we might end up in an accident" Swayam bites back his laughter.
"Don't get all flustered about it, this isn't a date"
"What?"
"I just said maybe because your expressions were priceless and I knew you would over think this."
He tries not to laugh as he remembers Sharon's shell shocked face. Sharon just looked at him totally confused. This wasn't a date? She should be doing a happy dance now right? She doesn't have to worry about things getting awkward or anything like that. Then why in some remote corner of her brain she was disappointed. She shoves the ideas in a corner but she knows they will come back to haunt her.
"So where are we going then?"
"As I said before, somewhere."
"Why are you keeping it a secret? Wait! Do you plan on murdering me?"
"What?" Swayam replies amusingly.
"Seriously Sharon? What goes on in that brain of yours?"
"Currently it's how you plan on murdering me." "
Calm your brain down! We'll be there in about half an hour."
Sharon looks at him before turning back to the window.
"Have I ever mentioned that I learned karate?" she says not looking away from the window.
"Yes you did" Swayam says.
"Good."
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"Swayam where are we?"
"Did you go to school Sharon?"
"Of course"
"Did you learn to read?"
"Yes, but.."
"What is written on the board ahead of you?" Swayam asked like he was asking a five year old to read something.
"Auditions."
"That answers your questions."
"But why are we here?"
"To give auditions Sharon."
"Why are you giving auditions?" Sharon said hoping to change the topic "I never knew you were interested in dancing Swayam." Sharon completed chuckling.
Swayam glared at her and replied "Sharon, You are giving the auditions."
"What? Na na no naught never aha nope!"
"Why?" Swayam furrowed his eyebrows together.
"I don't know how to dance."
"Really Sharon! At least give a good excuse."
"Please Swayam.. " "
Sharon Rai Prakash you are going inside and giving the auditions" Swayam ordered. "Ok ok but Swayam how will I manage?"
"It's just a local competition. Just 3 rounds. You can manage it."
"Swayam I really don't think this is a good idea."
"You always push this topic aside Sharon! You want to prove your parents that dance can be a career option right?"
"Wait how?"
"That's not important. You have to take a step forward towards your dream Sharon! You only regret the things you haven't done in life."
Sharon stood there absorbing the words. They were always in her head, she wanted to take a step forward but something would stop her. Maybe she just needed someone to push her forward.
"So ready to go?"
"But I don't have a routine."
"Just dance to the tune Sharon like the time we first met."
"Ok"
Let's go my lady!"
"OKAY!"

Edited by .Vrushanholic. - 9 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

That was not a date..
Why...
Nevermind..
Soon there will be a date..

So its auditions..
Good..
Nice update

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i_yatharthk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

So it was not a Date but nervermind i dont regret that itxwas not...
Wen i trad auditions a smile crept on my face and dats wat i feel is a sign of a good good writer...sumthin reltd to past a slight hint about it is given but all so not recognizable thn but it is shown in the future these r those thngs about d3 nd seeng thecsame type repeating it really feels dat not just for saying d3...palkimam's d3 is definitely among us still...hope keep the good logical writing of urs going on nd on...

Do pm wen u nxt update plz...

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athi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

really nice update

sharon happy and sad both at the same time

as swayam said her that it wasnt a date

that was great

swayam persuading sharon to take part in the dance competition

he knows how to make her do it

nice updates so far

update nxt one soon

do pm me the next tym you update

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Ananya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

loved it... looking forward fr d next update...

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Rachel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Chapter 5
"Nothing happens to me" the screen roared before playing the Sherlock title theme. Sharon sat in front of the TV with ice cream and popcorn sprawled across her. Work and dance practices were really hectic and Sharon deserved a day off. Sherlock, ice cream, popcorn and her bed. Perfect! Just as John walked into the park Sharon's doorbell rang. Sharon let out a cry of frustration. Who dared to disturb her in between a Sherlock marathon? If it was Swayam she swore in her head that he would not leave the house alive. She specifically told him he was not to disturb her, not even a single message.
But why do you think it is him? It can be anyone. Her subconscious spoke.
Who else can it be huh? He must have thought it would be fun to annoy me. She replied back to herself.
But you will be happy if he does come? Back came a reply.
No I wouldn't. Arghh why am I even thinking about this?
The bell rang one more time. "Coming.." Sharon yelled. Her plans of a peaceful Sherlock marathon were ruined! As she opened the door her annoyed face changed into one with a huge smile.
"Shar..."
"Anku " she said and hugged her best friend Ankita.
"Shar... let go... I can't breathe.. "
Just to annoy her more she hugged her tighter.
"No Anku. It's been so looonnng! "
"So? Will you murder me for that?" Ankita choked out.
"Maybe." Sharon said releasing Ankita.
"Your mind has always been twisted."
"So I have heard."
"Are we just going to stand here?"
"If you say so."
"Argh! You haven't changed a bit."
"Of course I haven't. Come in." They remained in silence till Ankita saw the condition of her bed.
"Oh! No wonder you wanted to murder me."
"I was considering it yes!" Sharon switched off the television. Sherlock could wait her friend wouldn't.
"But now that you are here, I can't tell you to leave can I?"
"Even if you did I wouldn't." Ankita replied. Sharon sat on her taking a big scoop of ice cream.
"Sharing is caring Sharon."
"Ok fine." Sharon reluctantly handed the ice cream tub to her.
"Ok now that you have learned the art of sharing Sharon, spill."
"Spill what?"
"Who's the guy?"
"What guy?"
"Sharon."
"Ankita."
They both glared each other.
"Spill."
"There is nothing to spill."
"There is. You like a boy, I can sense it." Ankita said proudly. Sharon's eyes popped out as she heard her say this. Why is she surrounded by psychics? She needed to be with normal people ASAP!
"Earth calling Sharon." Ankita's voice brought her to reality.
"How did you know?" There was no point in denial. If she did deny it Ankita would not give up until she heard the answer which she wished to hear. She could make her say a yes' to anything even if it was the things that she wouldn't do or things that didn't even exists. Sharon was sure she could be a detective or something because of her questioning skills.
"You are not going to deny it?" Ankita asked.
"And be forced to accept it? Accepting it firsthand is the easier way." Sharon replied.
"You have gotten smart." Ankita remarked.
"I was never stupid." Sharon replied. Ankita gave her a look meaning REALLY?' Sharon just rolled her eyes.
"Anyway," Ankita spoke "What is his name?"
"Ankita I am not even sure that I like him or he likes me." Sharon said.
"Oh you do like him. She you blushed even though I didn't even say his name" Well what Ankita said was true, Sharon's cheeks were shaded with a slight shade of pink.
"Ok maybe I do like him."
"Yes! I thought I would have to spend more time making you admit it but I was wrong."
"Haha"
"So... it's the guys from the theatre right? What was his name?" Ankita thought aloud.
"Swayam."
"Aha yes Swayam. Swayam Sharon. Sharon Swayam."
"Stop it Anku!" Sharon yelled flustered.
"OK are you going to tell him?"
"Why should I?"
"Why shouldn't you?"
"Because... I don't know. I can't. My mind goes blank and comes up with crazy ideas at the same time when he is around." "Classic signs of love."
"Ankita!" With that Ankita kept her mouth shut and being a good best friend just heard Sharon's problems.
"Like a week ago he takes me somewhere and I assume it's a date."
"And was it a date?" Ankita squealed like a fangirling teenager.
"No. He took me for auditions."
"He did what?" asked a shocked Ankita because she herself had tried countless times to make Sharon go for an audition and here comes a guy and makes her agree effortlessly? Ok she had to admit that she was jealous of him now. Who knew?
"Ankita?" Sharon said looking at Ankita as she was lost in her train of thoughts.
"Yes?"
"I was saying he took me for auditions and was successful in convincing me and I even managed to get into the third round." "What? That's amazing! I have to meet this guy."
"I'll be sure to do that."
"And you say he doesn't like you."
"What?" Now it was Sharon's turned to be shocked.
"Obviously he does. Actions speak louder than words Sharon. He forcing you to give auditions is a big sign that he cares and likes you." Ankita said proud of her explanation.
"You sure?" Sharon asked softly.
"Of course. How can you be so naive? I haven't met this guy and I already know he likes you."
"Every person is not a born Sherlock like you." Sharon said sarcastically.
"Let's talk about you love life after we finish this ice cream."
"Happily!" Sharon said happy that Ankita chose to focus on ice cream. The thought of Swayam liking her back and her having the same effect on him like him having an effect on her send chills down her spine. As much she would have loved to focus her mind completely at the goodness called ice cream in front of her, her mind wandered back to Swayam. She liked him way too much or maybe she was in love?

Edited by .Vrushanholic. - 9 years ago

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