New ~~!KRIYAANSH!~~ FF !!HAMRAHI!! chp-9 updted page 21 - Page 3

proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Lovely Concept And CS !

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Amazing start
Interesting concept
Do continue
Thanks for the PM

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Usha

@Usha29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Nice start, Rey & kriya are completely different.
And somewhat like opposite attraction, may be they
Liked each other. Liked the CS & first chapter.
Do update soon & thanks for the PM.

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Lovely updAte rey n sw ka convo really good but meko sab se jyada kria ka intro pasand aaya the way u explain her entry was really beautiful

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kirti jain

@kittu93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awesome update

liked kriya's entry

thanks for pm

update soon

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Wow, that's so sweet...

Rey was thinking about her future wife, seemed cute.

And the diary girlfriend, Lol...🤣

Kriya is so nice.

I loved the mango part.

U have described the scene beautifully.

Bachhan babu, u rocked,

Par itna chota sa...

Update dene mein toh tujh se jyaada Kanjoos toh ho hi nahi sakta...Koi tujhe takkaar nahi de sakta.

Thoda bada update chahiye nxt time.

Warna mujh se bura aur koi nahi.

Mind it...Huh.

Loved the update.

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

awsom updt

loved it

love rey and kriy athougts

cont soon

thnx f rpm

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

The start is amazing...

Both having thoughts abt their future life partners...

Loved the mango moment...Kriya was so cute and innocent and genuine

Bit rude Rey and lively Kriya...excited to know hw their story continues

update jaldi

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

wow this was fabulous and i dear was scrap u for this only that i will came later and read this...
so they are wish to have this same qualities in their partner and fabulous and amazing...
do continue soon

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Awesome...

beautifully written..

loved it..

really excited for the next part..

update soon..

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