That was really emotional
I'm actually crying aswel
Hope that never happens in the show
Thanks for the pm
Write more soon
Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa
Wow!! Awesome dude...
Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya
really emotional
amazing
Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
Rula diya na tumne mujhe..!
first of all,thanks a lot Sanika for dedicating ur OS to me...dear love u loads..Secondly,u captured every single nuance of the sceen beautifully,so much so that I could visualise it in front of my eyes..Zain's pain..the heartbreaking ending..and the fact that he at last lost the last embodiment of Aaliya's presence in his life..Sanika You were at ur usual best..I was compleetly lost while reading this..and it felt as if I could hear the beeping sound of the monitor while it flatlined..and also the inpeneetrable silence that would follow..thank u for writing such an awesome piece..And plz update ur A-Z series on Thrsday!
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Im out... will unres before episodeunresmujhe tragedies se sakt nafrat hai๐if u were not the writer, i would not even have read the piece!๐ณanyways, don't expect lamba sa commentshukar maano i'm commenting even after hating tragedies!it was a very touching oneat first , i was pretty much confused if it was aliya who was goin to die...and later i realised you are so evil that u did not let even aliya live๐ญand then, Allah took away the only reason for zain's existance๐ญ๐ญi don't know what to say!u are undoubtedly a gifted writer
Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
omg
beyond awesome
superb
damn good
u r amazing writer
Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA
omgg dear!!! it was very emotional nd heart wrenching os๐ญ but BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN๐โญ๏ธ..hats off to u..ty so
much for d pm..
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