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Anagha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

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Unrest!!

M first!! Awesome update Aaliya still cares for Zain !!

Waiting for d next part update soon

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

amazing
I loved it
soo nice
good job
better u r not wasting the character(sanam)

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: anaghazaya
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Unrest!!
M first!! Awesome update Aaliya still cares for Zain !!
Waiting for d next part update soon

Thanks...😛..

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

lovely part

update soon

aliya still cares...she obviously is still in love with him

and i hope sanam is a positive character in ur story

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee
lovely part
update soon
aliya still cares...she obviously is still in love with him
and i hope sanam is a positive character in ur story

Thanks for liking...

Well NAFRAT AND MOHABBAT was the theme of BI...so I am following that...

SANAM...well she may be positive...coz there is too much negativity in BI...

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Lovely update

Loved it

Very nicely written

Continue soon

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Hmmm...here goes...

Part 4- ZAIN ALIYA AUR WOH...

ALIYA surprised to see SANAM...

ZAIN says ALIYA ye SANAM hai...

ALIYA stops him from completing - Jaanti hoon SANAM ZAIN ABDULLAH...angrily

SANAM - NAHI ALIYA hum Sirf dost hain AUR ZAIN ne kaha tha ki...

ALIYA - dekhiye mein NAHI CHAHTI ki MERI wajah se ZAIN mami ka diya wada todna NAHI chahiye...isliye please tum yahan se ZAIN ko lekar ja sakti ho...

ZAIN refuses to go...main TUMHARE BINA KAHIN NAHI jaaonga...

ALIYA - to teekh hai main khud yahan se chali jaaongi..

SANAM - NAHI ALIYA...hum chale jayenge aaj sham ko please aap koi takleef mat Lena...she leaves but ALIYA stops her and asks her to stay here itself...

SANAM...thanks her...

ZAIN looks at her unwillingly to leave...

SANAM tells him let it be (in action)

Later...ALIYA had prepared soup for ZAIN she sees SANAM passing by and asks her to give it to ZAIN...

SANAM takes a heaped spoon of black pepper pd unknowingly and tries to add it to the soup...

ALIYA stops her - NAHI SANAM, ZAIN ko spicy khana pasand NAHI he...

SANAM surprised to see ALIYA's concern for ZAIN...she says sorry mujhe Pata NAHI tha...aap ZAIN ko BOHOT acchi tarah se Jaanti ho...

ALIYA - Jaanti THI...par ab NAHI...

SANAM..sach mein...ZAIN TUMHE BOHOT pyar karta hai...AUR mujhe lagta hai KAHIN NA KAHIN tum bhi usey MOHABBAT karti ho...

ALIYA...mein...NAHI

SANAM- phir ZAIN ko TUMne ghar ke andar KYUN aane diya tha?

ALIYA - Baarish THI...agar koi AUR hota to main wahi karti...insaniyat ke LIYE...

SANAM- AUR ab ITNI FIKR ZAIN ke khane me...usey to pyar hi kehte hai NA...

ALIYA does not answer and leaves in anger...

SANAM gives the soup to ZAIN...ZAIN asks whether she talked to her...

She replies...koshish ki THI par wo maanti hi NAHI hai...

ZAIN - Kash ek baar wo maan leti...sab teekh ho jayega...

SANAM - mujhe lagta hai ALIYA ko akele CHOD dena chahiye...is se wo TUMHARE pyar ke baare mein soch to sakti hai...

ZAIN thinks she is right and thanks her for her help...he decides to leave ALIYA to give her some space to think about her love to him...

In the evening...ZAIN goes to ALIYA's room which is locked...he knocks and call out to her...

ZAIN - MALLIKA e ZAIN...main ja raha hoon...

ALIYA surprised to hear ZAIN leaving but does not answer...

ZAIN - main Jaanta hoon...tum mujhe MAAF NAHI karogi...par mein TUMHE HAMESHA pyar karta hoon AUR Jaanta hoon tum bhi mujhe utna hi pyar karti ho...

ALIYA is in tears to hear ZAIN's words but still does not reply...

ZAIN - Allah hafiz...leaves

SANAM hears this...and is also trying to leave when ALIYA opens her door and comes out...

SANAM turns and sees ALIYA...she tells her to think just once if you truly love ZAIN...forgive him...

ALIYA - SANAM please...Maine ZAIN ko us din hi MAAF kar diya tha...jab ZAIN ne APNI GALTI maan li THI...

SANAM - to phir KYUN ZAIN se ITNI naaraz ho?

ALIYA - Maine mana kiya tha TALAAQ dene...kyunki Maine MAMU ke LIYE is rishte ko Kayam rakhne CHAHTI THI...par phir bhi ZAIN ne TALAAQ diya tha...ab KYA Bacha ki main uske paas laut jaaon?...

SANAM replies pyaar...tum dono ek doosre se BOHOT pyar karte hain...ZAIN ne TUMHE bachaya tha pyar ke LIYE...ye jaankar bhi wo tumse nafrat kar raha tha...

ALIYA remembers how ZAIN bashed MALIK when he mis behaved with her...later saw ZAIN sleeping next to her...ZAIN refusing as nothing happened b/w them...she thinks Kash TUMne TALAAQ NA diya hota...Kash TUMne wo sach PEHLE hi JAAN Ilya hota...ye sab NAHI hota...

SANAM - ALIYA, ZAIN AUR mein Sirf dost hain...AUR KUCH NAHI...Maine khud ZAIN ka pyar dekha tha...AUR Maine khud Nikah Karne se mana kar diya...kyunki ZAIN tumse beintehaa MOHABBAT karta hai...isliye tum ek baar soch lo...koi NA koi Raasta zaroor niklega...she leaves

ALIYA shocked to hear ZAIN and SANAM not married...ZAIN on the other hand gives a last glance to the door thinking ALIYA will stop him...but SANAM comes out and he is in tears as ALIYA did not come out to stop him..ALIYA is in tears as she feels there is no other way to go back to ZAIN as they are divorced....(BI intense music plays)

Hope you like it...😛

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Loved it!!

Waiting for d next part!!

Kya Aaliya Zain ko rokh paayegi??

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

amazing update

continue soon

pls pm me when u update

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Well sorry for the delay...

PART 9 - TUMHARE BINA...

ALIYA thinks there is no other way possible to go to ZAIN...hence stops herself...but how can she?

She runs to the door to get a last glance of ZAIN...but by then ZAIN leaves...she is crying desperately and questions herself...KYUN MEIN APNE AAP KO ROK NAHI PA RAHI HOON?

The next day...ZAIN is getting ready to go for work...he sees ALIYA's pic on the table and remembers some light moments shared with her...he tells to the pic..I LOVE YOU MALLIKA E ZAIN...and leaves for work...

ZAIN in his office is being welcomed by the staff...one of the members come to him and say...SIR AAPKE CABIN ME ALIYA MAAM...

ZAIN hearing ALIYA's name rushes to his cabin thinking ALIYA to be there...but finds no one...

He calls out ALIYA...then some staff comes to him and hands over a letter of ALIYA's name...

He reads it and it is a TRANSFER of PROPERTY letter...which ALIYA had written to withdraw the MEHR...

She has also written a letter...Ab tum JAAN Gaye hoge...ki Maine is MEHR ka rakm KYUN Iiya tha...MAMU ne mujhe ek umeed di THI is rishte ko barqaraar rakhne...ab jab sab khatam ho CHUKA hai...is MEHR ko TUMHE wapas karti hoon ab ye mera paas hona munasib NAHI HOGA...

ZAIN remembers how he insulted her when she accepted the MEHR...he notices his wedding pic with MAMU which ALIYA kept...he says I am sorry DAD, main NAHI Jaanta tha ki aapne ye sab KYUN kiya...par ab mujhe TUMHARE faisle ko maana chahiye tha...is se mujhe aaj itna pachtava NAHI hota...par mein puri koshish karoonga ...ALIYA ko MERI zindagi mein wapas la kar rahoonga...

ALIYA on the other hand is holding zain's coat which she last left in MATHERAN...she thinks Agar koi Raasta hota...to mein khud tumhari paas aati THI ZAIN...par ab jab TUMne saare rishtey tod diye ho...to kaise main tumhe apna sakti hoon...Kash TUMne ye baat PEHLE Socha tha...

SANAM...visits REHANs house to question about some legal business...REHAN invites her in...he goes to get some documents when SANAM notices a newspaper article with the title...BARKAT ROYALE CELEBRATES INDEPENDENCE DAY...it has a photo of ZAIN ALIYA, REHAN and others participating in the kite competition...

She questions REHAN whether he knows either ZAIN or ALIYA...

REHAN- haan, main ZAIN ko apna bhai maanta hoon AUR ALIYA Baccho ki acchi dost hain...par tum KYUN ye sab pooch rahi ho...

SANAM - main ZAIN ki dost hoon...Jaante ho ZAIN AUR ALIYA ka..

REHAN - completes...TALAAQ HUWA tha...Maine koshish kiya tha ZAIN ko samjhane ki par usne phir bhi ALIYA ko TALAAQ diya...

SANAM - par ZAIN to ALIYA ko BOHOT pyaar karta hain...

REHAN - ALIYA bhi usey BOHOT pyaar karti THI...isliye usne mana kiya tha ZAIN ko TALAAQ dene par...

SANAM - NAHI...ALIYA ab bhi ZAIN se pyaar karti hain...Maine khud dekha tha Bhopal mein usne...(she tells every thing in flashback)...par wo ZAIN se isliye door hai ki un dono ka TALAAQ HUWA hai...AUR ZAIN ko bhi usne MAAF kar diya hai...

REHAN - Par ZAIN...

SANAM - ZAIN ne 3 TALAAQ isliye diya tha kyunki usne wada kiya tha unke mom se ki wo mujhe Nikah KAREGA...par MATHERAN mein jo pal usne ALIYA ke saath guzare...uske baad wo apna Faisla badla diya tha...

REHAN - MATHERAN mein...

SANAM tells how ZAIN had bashed MALIK when he assaulted ALIYA...how he shouted MERI BIWI hai woh..to REHAN...

REHAN also remembers how ALIYA said she had spent time with ZAIN and was sure he would have not given TALAAQ...and thinks...agar ZAIN AUR ALIYA doosre TALAAQ ke baad ek doosre ka itna FIKR AUR khayal karte they KYA unka TEESRa TALAAQ HUWA tha ya NAHI...

Well here it is...my style...I used all the characters coz I think the leap was not at all required and no HALALA🤢...anyways...😉

Hope you liked it...

Edited by 786ahf_bi - 10 years ago

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