Os:god what have i done part 2/2 of 1 UPDATED

Okay ppl i suck at writing and i dont want u ppl to break ur pc after my shitty os otherwise i would hv written one

Why doesnt someone write an os in which zain is repenting and aaliya is giving it bac to him as to how rude he had been acting since dos 3 months(as cvs think they were for us it wsnt even 3 episodes tho :p)aaliya in a total ladhai mood


What say???




Part 2/2 of 1Part 1/2 of 1 below

You Should Write 😊 Go For It 😃

Atleast try to kar Gauri

Originally posted by: ZaYa990

You Should Write😊Go For It😃

u guys try na
M not bety good with dialogues

Part one
Zain listens to the recording is schocked falls on the sofa but then thinks to himself ab bhi kuch khatam nai hua hai zain * then remembers aaliya begging him not to give her teesra tallak n rushes to her room
Zain:aaliyaaa *checks her room but she isnt der*
Rehaan!rehaan!
Rehaan: *comes inside* recording sunli zain *with an expressionless face*
Zain:aaliya kahan hai rehaan
Rehan:too late zain shes gone
Everything is over sab barbaad kardiya tumne ab accha hoga ki tum sanam k sath aage badh jao kyunki ab wapsi ka koi chance nai hai
*zain remembers aaliya saying the exact same words*
God what have i done now someone plz kill me
Why
Da fck
Didnt
U
Punch me
In the face
Aaliya
*runs to suraiya*
Suri; kya hua zain tum tayaar nai hue kaazi sahab aa chuke h
Zain: *with ref watery eyes*mom m sorry me aapse kiya hua vaada poora nahin kar sakta
Main sanam se nikah nahin kar sakta


Shud i continue

Great start you should continue :)

Plz continue eager 2 read d next part

A big wala yes...
Continue soon..

Sirry guya bot chote updates hai par mom just dsnt lemme write in peace

So , part 2/2 of 1


Suri: zain???? :0
Zain : haa mom aaliya...
Suri n zarina in chorus; kyaa !! Allah jaane us manhoosiyat se firse mere zain pe kya jadoo kar diya hai
Sanam:*crying* aunty ye zain kya keh raha hai
Sanams parents consoling her: haan suraiya ji ye hum kya sun rahe hai
*Zain played the recording*
And...

very well written gauri :)
eager to knw wat happen next