~|| ZaYa FF~ Rhythm of Love_Hum Tum ~ Ch 7 Updtd PG 40 ||~ - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
its really awesome
loved it
very well written
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks for d PM 😳
Update soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update is M.A.G.N.I.F.I.C.E.N.T
Loved this update
It was so awesome
Loved the elevator scene
The end was perfect
Continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing uodate continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update...πŸ‘
Superb!
Aliya takes her water gun everywhere...for her safety..lol!
Really loved it❀️
Who's the new entry?! Zubbu??
Pls continue ASAP


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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice chapter
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...
Avery nice update...
Thanks for the pm
And continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was really really awesome
specially d elevetor seq
so cute update
really loved it
waiting 4 d next part :)
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It was super duper awesome!!!!πŸ‘..Elevator part was superbbπŸ˜†...amazingly writtenπŸ‘πŸΌ...totally loved it❀️...thank u so much for pm😊...waiting for d next partπŸ˜›...nd Happy Diwalii!!!!!πŸ€—
Edited by RUHANIKAA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

unres

omg vishiπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
yeh tere rhythm of love mere rhythm of heart ban gaya hai
I lov this story of urs
ur mindblasting writer
tere bina kick muje milti nahi hoye
awesome lines
mr kitkit bhuhaha
sorry mere exams thain
waise shock toh mujhe hona chahiye tumhe yaha dekh k 😳 Tum jaise angry boring kitkit karne wale log bhi shopping karne mall aa sakte ho ? Sounds interesting hmm 😳
Zain: oh shut up.. You are following me right?
Aliya: Aliya ladko ko nahi ladke Aliya ko follow karte hai 😎
Zain: Oh please πŸ₯± mere paas itna faltu time nai hai jo tumhe follow karu infact main toh tumhe kabhi twitter ya insta mein bhi follow na karu
Aliya imagines herself as Blue Lays and Shaz eating her in anger 😈
Aliya screams ---- nooo
Zain pinches Aliya.. Oouch..🀣🀣🀣🀣


yeh dekh ke muje lays kana hai aaj lol
miss water gun bani aloo chips
zain vampire bhwahaha🀣🀣🀣


thumbs up sceneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ€£
She notices him coming towards her.
He steps forward she steps back..
Aliya: kkk kya kar rahe ho?
Zain: abhi pata chal jayega main Hot vampire hoon yaa nahi 😎
He pins her to corner of elevator..
Her flying curly brown hairs covered her face completely.
He with his fingers tuckles it back slowly and gently..
Their eyes meet yet again.

BG: Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon
Jaoon main ab jab jiss jagah
Paoon main tujhko uss jagah
Saath hoke na ho tu hai
Rubaroo rubaroo
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

double thumbs up sceneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Elevator opened ..
Rizwan with crowd gathered there only to witness sight of two lovers who seemed not ashamed of their public display of love.
As from outside it seemed they were busy kissing eachother.
Lady 1: Dekho toh besharmo ko 😑
Lady 2: hum toh tension mein the in dono k liye par ye dono saari tension chod k lage hue hai huh
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Ladies gossiping.
Teenage Girls: Wow just look at them.. True lovers Guts hai yaar dono mein 😎
Rizwan: Zain.. Bahar nikal
Zain: abhi nai aa sakta sorry.
Aliya: bas thoda sa aur.
Zain: yaa do it slowly.
Ladies gossiping nonsense continuously.
After few minutes..
Aliya: Yes finally ho gya and hugged Zain tightly in excitement.
Zain huggef her back.
They got up and finally came outside.
Aliya: mazaa aya na πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰
Ladies heard their convos and thought ut patang stuff.
Rizwan: Dude bahit jaruru kaam hai lets go.
Aliya too left the place in confusion.
aliya ne gift ko dustbin main peka
nd zain wore tht same watch crazy ishq vishq
rocking as usual⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by jilmil.1 - 9 years ago
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