Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Well written, gayathri ji!!! Very poignant and intriguing!! Thanks for the PM!! Continue soon!!
Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes
Nice gayatri! I really loved it but.
This part really touched me heart -"You made love a forbidden feeling in me Mata Kunti" I said regaining back my senses.
Do continue soon dear!
Originally posted by: Shriya95
It was deep Gayatri...very very deep...the emotional conflict, the turmoil very well done!!! Arjun's scilence went like a dagger through my heart but the last line blew me away!! No one even bothered to help change the situation and kunti...I really like the way u described her. It was mind blowing Gayatri,totally!!!! Continue soon!!!!
Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
such an amazing update gayatri
poor draupadi all her dreams were shattered in just one sec . her shock ,despair has been written very well
Originally posted by: angeala95
Aww i just remembered that episode!! How drau just looked and looked and went away frm there!!
My poor krishnaa!! I just dont understand how marrying one person can break the other brother's unity!!Even I don't understandEven if kunti thot that her other sons wanted her then what difference does it make?? When they knrw that she is their brother's wife then they would have dealt with it, but then everyone gives that previous birth blessing excuse!!previous birth is the most lame excuse I have ever heard... wateva happnes this birth blame it on previous birth of which u wil hav no account of ! 🥱
I just cant imagine what she must have felt at that time!!its really hard to imagine, even wen we put ourselves in her shoes, our imagination my cease to think further and accept it!
Brilliant writing!!There is a certain kind of flow in your writing, even when we knw what is gonna happen in the story, u jusy wanna go in the flow and see what happens!!Thank you so much 🤗 means a lot ❤️
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