Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16) - Page 12

Well written, gayathri ji!!! Very poignant and intriguing!! Thanks for the PM!! Continue soon!!

Nice gayatri! I really loved it but.

It was deep Gayatri...very very deep...the emotional conflict, the turmoil very well done!!! Arjun's scilence went like a dagger through my heart but the last line blew me away!! No one even bothered to help change the situation and kunti...I really like the way u described her. It was mind blowing Gayatri,totally!!!! Continue soon!!!!

such an amazing update gayatri

Aww i just remembered that episode!! How drau just looked and looked and went away frm there!!
My poor krishnaa!! I just dont understand how marrying one person can break the other brother's unity!!
Even if kunti thot that her other sons wanted her then what difference does it make?? When they knrw that she is their brother's wife then they would have dealt with it, but then everyone gives that previous birth blessing excuse!!

I just cant imagine what she must have felt at that time!!
Brilliant writing!! There is a certain kind of flow in your writing, even when we knw what is gonna happen in the story, u jusy wanna go in the flow and see what happens!!

Nice one girl... 😊 You understand Draupadi well. :) Continue.. and great to see that you are sticking to the original but narrate her Swayamvar soon too.

Brilliant writing dear.The tense situation and Krishnaa's internal turmoil and her dilemma is portrayed flawlessly.And it touched me that she remembered HIM at her hour of sorrow.And the explanation of Kunti's eyes and attitude👏 And the last line... it just blew me off.Extraordinary update dear⭐️

what an update just loved it

Brilliant update. This was my fav line

"You made love a forbidden feeling in me Mata Kunti" I said regaining back my senses.

Do continue ur next part soon 😊

Awesome 👏 👏 pls continue soon..