SS : Arjun-Rochanagarbha (citation-pg 2,update page 2 and 4) - Page 4

Awesome ... you made me 😭😭... very well written... I loved the conclusion too😊 the whole family together👍🏼

good story..love the way you describe Rochanagarbha felling before his father presence and after his father knows about him..and love to see Abhimanyu is really love his little brother👏⭐️..And finnaly Rochanagarbha realize that evryone is love him just like they love his big brother Abhimanyu😊

Loved it... Totally loved it.. Amazing..Father-Son bonding was too amazing..

Arudi,u made me so emotional😭...what a beautiful bond btwn father n son...so cute...all show affection to garbha...he realised itna?...abhi...sweet bro of him😳...atlast family is together...that's what i needed now...but😭😭...
lovely update...
thanks for the pm😊

beautifully written!

Thank you so much for pm.

🥳ParAv hug and a cute ArSu family moment.I dont want anything more .You made my weekend Though the last part of the story made me emotional I am still under the trance of the ParAv hug.Awww...my Madhav is truly a magic He wipes away every bit of uneasiness with his smile and a hug.What Arjun can do is to helplessly surrender to the charm.And poor Rochanagarbha...Baby got scared by his father and brother🤗And loved the way Krishna silently understands everything.He knows his nephew well.Also loved my Abhi as a caring and concerned elder brother

Oho! I loved the part. I love the way u bring out emotions in a simple language. Aru di, after reading your FF I also want to take up a SS on Rochangarbha but after sometime. Let this story sink in first and then I would start writing my own ( and its great that u wish the same)

This was so unusual! Read all the parts together at one go! Think of a young child who is repeatedly denied what should've naturally come to him. Honestly in the second generation Mahabharat Abhimanyu seemingly overshadows everyone, Prativindhya and Ghatotkach make an appearance but again its all reduced to Abhimnayu.

Wow ! What A Subtle Ending ! Loved It !!