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Sanika

@Legilimens

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

^ I read your ps first :P welcome to the forum dear. What's your name?
I'll answer your review properly a bit later.. and thank you for not.citing adjectives.
you do realise that you are a treat for writers.
and I feel that if you do not like something, you'll critisize.
please do not refrain from doing so in my works.
I simply love your review.
p.s- vinu, your spot's gone 😛

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Aastha

@craziness05

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Sanika u r an awesome writer...u pened down zain's feeling so beautifully I mean how do u do this...??U literally brought tears in my eyes his pain,his misery,his actions,his thought everything was described so beautifully👏 and I will not be able to explain you why I loved this os so sorry😆 and he last thing I love u so much yaar🤗 aise updates dete rehna...!!😃

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MohabbatCrazy

@MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

A perfect os! Thts all i gotta say

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

tht ws excellent os!!!!!👏👏👏..brilliantly written...u describe emotions so well!!!.Absolutely loved it.. ❤️

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AnnRosewood

@AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

It was awesome...but for reasons that we all will agree on...

1) Your impeccable use of words and your description

2) The dialogues which never fail to make us laugh or cry

3) the way you create the atmosphere and slowly unfurl the emotions ,and its very hard to wrap up something so intense in a single chapter.

3) You are a born genius and it was another amazing product from ur factory!

FRom

Ann

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow that was super emotional
Loved it
Missed or one shots
Write some more soon
And please pm me when u do

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NihuM

@NihuM

Beginner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome os.
loved how Zain was consoled by Aliya, how he found solace in her arms.
You are a very good writer. Have you written more?

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bashful_moon

@bashful_moon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
^ I read your ps first :P welcome to the forum dear. What's your name?
I'll answer your review properly a bit later.. and thank you for not.citing adjectives.
you do realise that you are a treat for writers.
and I feel that if you do not like something, you'll critisize.
please do not refrain from doing so in my works.
I simply love your review.
p.s- vinu, your spot's gone 😛

Thanks for welcoming me to the Forum.. I go by the nominal of Yasna.. My friends call me Yasu or Ya even...

Thanks for calling me a treat for writers... Coming from you I take that as a big compliment...# Pat my back..😉

Of course, I will let you or other writers in the Forum know if I don't like certain thing.. Please keep writing more. I can survive the current bleakness if writers like you keep on writing such intense yet happy stuffs..

Apologies for late reply. College sucked, my dance teacher got down from the wrong side of bed for the whole week, the heat was scorching and the sports drill in humid, sweaty afternoons were maddening. To top it all, the current episodes of BI were no stress busters as they used to be...

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