Zaya os:I cant leave u

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So this is based on the dream i got last night.
Hope u guys enjoy.


So zain and aliya in an office party where they are forced to dance together.
After the dance aliya hurries out of the party zain grabs her hand
Aliya:aaahhh
Zain:kahan jaa rahi ho
Aliya:mjhe dard ho raha hai
Zain:waah aliya ghulam haider...waah...thumhe hamesha sirf apna dard nazar aata hai na,
Mere dard ka kia?jaanti ho...tumne mjhe jeete jee maardia hai.kiu kia esa?
Aliya (with tears):mene kuch nahi kia zain...mene kuch bhi nahi kia
Zain:itne khush they hum...kiu kia esa?
Aliya:zain...
Zain pulls her hair
Zain:tumhari wajah se mene apne dad ko kho dia
Aliya:BAS zain.,,Bas
Aliya:tumhe mjhse nafrat karni hai to karo..talaaq deni hai to do...lekin mjpe ye jhoote ilzaam na lagao.
Tum apni nafrat me itne andhe hogye ho k tumhe sach dikhta hi nahi hai...kiu karun gi me esa?kia kabhi bhi bura chaha tha mene kisi ka😭
*she breaks down*
Dhoka to mere saath kia ami abbu ne...dhoke se mjse paper sign karae.mera ghar ujaar dia...tumhe kia lagta hai bht khush hoon main...pal pal marti hu me...jab tum mjhe in nafrat bhari aankhon se dekhte ho i just feel like killing myself...thakl gayi hu explainations dete dete.
Ab nahi doon gi me koi explanation.
Zain:jhoot hai ye sab...jhoot bol rahi ho tum
Aliya:choro mje...,choro
Zain:chor hi toh raha hu...,kal aakhri talaaq bhi hojae gi ...chor dunga
He leaves her with a jerk
Aliya starts to leave but stops
Aliya:saath doge mera...waada kia tha na?waade karna to aasaan hota hai..lekin nibhana mushkil hota hai un waadon ko.

And she leaves.

She sits by the pool and cries
Zain sits by the gazebo n cries.
Both look at the moon...this is the last moon of their married life.
Aliya and zain are reminded of all the memories
Their nikkah
Their kitkit
Their first dance
Their confession
Their first kiss
Their hugs
How they always consoled each other.

Just then they realize that they are incomplete without eachother.
Aliya and zain run towards eachother.
They come face to face
Aliya:zain...mjhe mat choro...i love u
Zain:i cant leave u...me tumhe nahi chor sakta...i love u

And they hug eachother and pour their hearts out



Chalo ab comment karo n thoko likeπŸ˜†

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res...!!!
Sorry dear... Will unress later...!!
Really sorry...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic i jus loved it... want this to happn.
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Originally posted by: Harshika4Life

fantastic i jus loved it... want this to happn.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm good.thnx for pm but the end should hv logic..
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very well written πŸ‘
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Wow beautiful os
Loved it
Very nicely written
Bought tears in my eyes
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I hope dis happens ...luved itπŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: Ashis

Awesum tee
<div></div>loved it


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb dear!
Very well written!
I so want the confrontation on the show!
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