Arjun-Subhadra(ArSu) OS : The Night Before Exile(Last Part On Page 3) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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GREAT STORY ROSEFAIRY😃
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The pain, the suffering, the anguish, the sorrow...whatever we call it, the magnitude is big. The way you have penned the respective leads thoughts from Draupadi to other wives of Pandavas, awesome, really fabulous.
The OS itself had so much for going for it but Subadhra bringing in the other wives plights...simply awesome.

Thanks for a super OS
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Your writing is superb. You convey the inner struggles of your characters well. 👏
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