Arjun-Subhadra(ArSu) OS : The Night Before Exile(Last Part On Page 3) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
like the post...thanks for the pm
plz try to give epilogue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
ufff hot passionate and beautiful update!! fr d first time reading such a hot piece frm u nd dat too on d most beautiful n cutest couple of mb..arjun-subhadra..n loved dat u mention all if pandavas wives who had to bear this pain..being apart frm deir hubbies..n lastly in one line u said it all about arjun-chitra!! awsm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
woow..romantic story betweent ArSu👏⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
awesome update
loved it waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
ArSu...☺️Aru its hot passionate and yet cute.ArSu is the perfect couple And this is the first time I am reading something of this kind from you.Loved it Aru.Also it touched me that you chose to mention the sorrow of the often forgotten people of the epic ..the other wives of the Pandavas.And most importantly this OS made me view Arjun in a different light .I always thought Arjun was very lucky.But it is only when you mentioned that thought struck me The pain of being away from your loved ones and seeing them suffer infront of your eyes is indeed unbearable.Also how simple calm but mature is my Subhi Loved her
My like button is not working I pressed it countless times but it remains insensitive.So dont think I dint like it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Nice update...
waiting for more of your writings.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome, beautiful ,passionate part
loved it
loved how Subhadra make arjun understand n how subhadra make peace in arjun's heart ...
it's beautiful
loved it
how subhadra explained other wives of pandava's n Arjun's pain

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Aru di...First of all, I loved these update. Secondly, I enjoyed these update much more than the previous one. Third, how do u always manage to steal whatever I think and put those in beautiful words in the forum.
You gave me the exact description of Subhadra and Arjuna and their love.I want to give u a detailed reply but don't know where to start.
You need to write a book Aru di and i will buy it for million dollars or more(I don't have that much money actually)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
res
unres
one word-passion
mad,true,intense passion😉😳
the description of the first para was simply so cute and sweet👏
loved the os
plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
WOW...WOW...so beautiful update,arudi...
loved it more...no words to praise it👏👏
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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