ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye - Page 8

Anisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

loved the update
so Zain is not ready to give up ha
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM

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deepika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

its cute..
Nicly written
pls update fast :)

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priya arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

nice update
pls try a bit long update pls:)
waiting 4 d next part

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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

amazing update!!!
nicely written..
thanks for d pm
plzzz update soon..

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Anagha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

All ur parts are awesome

Thanx for d pm

Will be w8ing for d next part plz continue soon

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zayalove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Plzzz continue it all the parts r really awsome

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Chapter 5(B)
Place : Barkat VillasTime : Around 2 at noon.
Both Zain and Rizwan reached home.Aliya is in kitchen when she heard the horn of Zain's car.Gauhar is running down the stairs.Both Zain and Rizwan entered the house.
Gauhar : You both came? How bored I was without you guys...So come on we will play something.Rizwan : Where is Aliya?Zain is shocked and turns towards him and he nudges him.Rizwan : Why are you getting nervous?Zain : What are you going to tell her?Aliya : Yes, I am coming.Rizwan : Just wait and watch my Bro.Zain : Rizwan no...no ... dont go...dont tell...Rizwan listen...Rizwaaan...Aliya : Yes, what?Rizwan : Aliya...ummm...huh...Zain...Aliya : Zain...? What Zain...?Rizwan : How will I tell you? Ummm...huh...Aliya : What happened? (Seeing Zain)Zain is blank and he went pale.Rizwan : Uhhh...Can he get some food? He skipped his lunch.(Rizwan went near Aliya's ears while saying this.)Aliya : (Shocked) What?She is looking at Zain.Without knowing what is happening Zain looked so confused and scared.Gauhar : What? What happened to Zain? Tell me na Rizwan? What happened? She went near Zain and shook his shoulders.Gauhar : Zain are you ok? Should I take you to a doctor? Zain...?Aliya burst out laughing and Rizwan joined her.Both were laughing leaving Zain and Gauhar confused.

Aliya : Come I'll make a plate for you.Rizwan : Zain, she is talking to you.Zain tapped Rizwan.Zain : Rizwan, Why? I was...Rizwan : Are you going to share your experience with me or go and eat?Zain : I'll better go and eat.Rizwan : Go bro. Have a nice time.Zain waved him and went towards the table.Gauhar followed Rizwan when he got a call.
Aliya : (Serving a plate) Here you go eat.Zain looked at the plate.Zain : What is this?Aliya : Food.Zain : Only this much? Do I look like a kid?Aliya : I only have...(She bit her tongue) Eat. Thats it.Zain : Hitler wife.He started eating.
Rizwan attended the call. He dint notice Gauhar behind him.He told about the bet B/W Zain and Aliya to his friend.Just then he turned and saw Gauhar and he changed the topic.
Gauhar : (Monologue) I will help Zain in this.
Zain got up from the table leaving his plate. The maid came his way.
Maid : Zain Were you having your lunch? Have you ordered from outside?Zain : No, Aliya gave me kid's food. She is too bad.(Makes a puppy face)Maid : Umm...She isnt I think.Zain : Why everyone in this house...Maid : She must have given you her food. She too dint had her lunch. She was waiting for you. By the way we dint made food for you as we thought you will have your lunch outside. I think She isnt that bad.Zain was left speechless. He went to the kitchen.Aliya was making some juice for her.He could only see it. His heart became heavy and he turned back.Zain : (Monologue) Why Aliya? Why? Even you dont know that I dont hate you. Even you dont know that I L...A tear rolled down his cheeks.

Place : ZaYa RoomTime : Around 4 at evening.
The still of Aliya making a glass of Juice is still in his mind.Gauhar entered the room.
Gauhar : Zain...It made his come out of his day dream.Zain : What?Gauhar : I just came here. Why Cant I come here?Zain : No not like that.Gauhar : Zain is there any bet b/w you and Aliya?Zain : Yes.Gauhar : With some tear or something...?Zain : Yes, I need to bring out a tear from her eyes.Gauhar : Ill give you an idea...See Aliya is from a village well that place is almost village...So these girls have a great shyness and they stay good in their character. Prove her wrong. Zain : What do you mean?Gauhar : I mean that, Prove that she is bad in her character and she dosent suit you.Zain : Gauhar (Shouts)Gauhar was scared and the smile and happiness in her face faded.Gauhar : What Zain? Is everything ok?Zain : Just get out and stay out of this.Gauhar : But Zain...Zain : I said go out.
Gauhar turned and saw Aliya near the door.
Aliya : Is everything ok?Zain : No nothing is ok. (Irritated)Aliya : Why were you so angry on her?Zain : Had your lunch?Aliya was shacked by his question.Aliya : What?Zain : I know you heard it and you heard it right. Had your lunch?Aliya : (Faked a smile) No, umm...I am fasting.Zain : But I think you had your breakfast right?Aliya is trapped. He loved trapping her. He loved her to see getting scared and taking steps aback. He moved forward. He was smirking.Aliya : Yes I had mine. Umm ... By mistake. So only I am going to pray for forgiveness. (Shows the towel in her hand)Zain : With a towel? Aliya : No, (She realised what she was having in her hand)...I think by mistake I took his out.She went back to the closet.Zain : You are doing lots of mistake nowadays.

Precap : Gauhar : Aliya I need to go to shopping can you come with me?Aliya : I think I wont be able to...I have some work and ...Gauhar : Oh please just half and hour...Aliya : Ok I'll go with you.Gauhar : (Monologue) Just wait and watch Aliya...This will be your best shopping.

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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Chapter updated.