ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow very nice part ... waiting 4 d 2nd part... continue soon
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amazing start👏
nicely penned
loved it❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I gave out 8 messages and got 12 likes and 9 comments.
Thank you for liking the story.

Check out the update in the next post.
Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

Place : Zain Aliya room.
Time : 12 midnight

Aliya came out dressed in a night gown wiping her jaw line. Zain is sitting in the sofa restlessly reading a magazine.

Zain : Aliya you came?
Aliya is confused.
Aliya : What?
Zain : I said you came out of the bathroom?
Aliya : Yeaaa I went into the bathroom so I can only come out of the bathroom...(Irritated) Whats there in it?
Zain : I thought you will come out in the morning.
Aliya is fuming with anger.
Aliya : I went to freshen up not to sleep there.
Zain : Freshen up? (Shocked)
Aliya: Yes...(confused)
Zain : I thought you went to sleep. BTW who told you you will sleep here in the bed. Practically no place for you. Even I dont accept you as my wife..(Enjoying the moment)
Aliya : (With a wide smile) For your kind information Zain, This is my Maamu's hose I need not to find a mean place to sleep.
Saying this she went to the bed and took a pillow and removed a blanket from the closet and made the sofa as her bed.
Zain was left speechless and anger. He also went to sleep.

Place : Zaya Room
Time : Around 10 in the morning.

Zain is restless and walking up and down. He seems to be waiting for someone. When he heard some foot steps he sat on the edge of his bed.
Aliya: Zain maami asked us to get this room cleaned.
She starts picking his dresses lying on the floor.
Zain : So do it. What need to ask me?
Aliya : I said she asked US to clean...Understand.
Zain: (Monologue) Thats what I want...Come lemme see you in tears.
Aliya : Room wont get cleaned by seeing it around. You need to get up and work.
Zain: Ok I am coming. Then dont regret..
Aliya : (Monologue) He dint asked any question or dint argue? Weird...
Zain : Aliya ji room wont get cleaned by rolling your eyes...You need to do some work.
Aliya looks at him and resumes the work.

During cleaning he is holding vase made of iron in his hand and he dint keep it down. Aliya is confused on his deeds..

In a few minutes he was beside her cleaning the sofa.

Zain intentionally made the vase fall on her leg.

Aliya : Ah what is this...? (Her toe is hurt and bleeding)
Zain : (Looking deeply into her face) Turn a lil and look at me.
Aliya : What? Why? Ahh
Zain : Oh man...you are not crying..?(Irritated) Uff my plan failed.
Aliya : So this is your plan to make me cry? (Shocked)
Zain : Then what?
Aliya : I'll never cry in front of you Zain. ...
Zain : Wah...
Aliya : Wait I have'nt finished my sentence. ...If I need to cry.
Zain : Smart line...I will make your eyes wet in front of me...my eyes...
Aliya : You will never get victory in this Zain Abdulla.
Zain : So lets have a bet. What will you do if I make you cry in one week?
Alya : I will leave this house on that day when I cry.
Zain : Getting a tear from your eye is not much difficult for me.
Alya : Lets see...
Zain : Lets see...Deal final.
Aliya: What will you do if I win?
Zain : I will...I wont loose.
Aliya : IF you loose...IF
Zain : I will accept you as my wife.
Aliya: Na Something bigger.
Zain : This will be the most dreadful thing in my life if I do so.
Aliya : (Getting tears in her eyes) Ok then. Done.
Zain left the room with a triumph smile.
She turned and a tear escaped her eye.



Precap: Aliya was crying out loud in the pool side. She heard some foot steps, she is shocked and in a hurry wiping out her tears.



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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
continue soon and pls pm me.i love sad stories.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
My heart goes out to Aliya
Awesome update dear
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
awesome
too good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Wow just amazing
I luv confident aaliya
Waiting 4 d next part:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
wow it's getting interesting
lets see what will he od to win the bet
loved it yr
thanks for the pm 😃
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