ZaYa SS: Its My Family! (Prt-3 on Pg-4) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic ss
love it
zain in bhopal cool
Lovely
cont soon tanu
and tahnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry For commenting late!
Superb updates as always!
Loved it :)
Zaya are shooo cute!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi people! Thank you so much for your comments as always. And this part is dedicated to my friends, who are really nice, and that's Ann (AnnRosewood) and Anki (CUTEZAYA). Thank you so much you two! Really awesome. And not only these two. But to all of them who are commenting and liking on this. Thank you so so much! Muahhh! Love you. So now back to the update. Hope you all like it! :)

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Haider Mansion
8:30 pm
Aaliya's POV

Traffic. Yaha toh Mumbai se bhi zyaada traffic hai! I hate this. And Zain. No don't get me wrong, I don't hate him. Its just that he is totally different from me when it comes to roadside food and traveling in public transport. He is such a spoilt sometimes. But still, my to-be husband.

"Arre beta tum dono aagye? Chalo andar jaake mu haath dho lo. Mei khana lagati hu!" Ammi came as she saw us two entering the house.


"Ammi hum kha ke aaye hai!" The truth was. I was so exhausted. I can't eat!

"Ji aunti. Aap log khaiye, mei zara freshen up hoke aata hu!" Go Zain. Go!

"Beta tu toh le le. Thoda sa?" Ammi said. Aww! She is so cute at times!

"Nahi Ammi. Mood nhi hai. I am too tired. Mei baad mei kha lungi!" I said as I walked to my room.

10:30 pm
Aaliya's Room
Aaliya's POV (yet again)

"Allah! This is exactly what I needed. A hot shower!" I said as I walked out of the washroom. I was in my towel only coz I had my door closed. Who would come in? I was about to take out my clothes from the wardrobe when I think I saw someone on the window. "Kaun hai waha?"

"Dekho mere shauhar neeche hi hai. I can call him now. Chale jao yaha se!"

I went near the window. I took a bat in my hand. The curtain moved. I raised my bat to hit the person.

"AAAHHH!"

"ZAAIIINNN???"

"Haan mei hu! I was planning on surprising you. Tumhe dara kr! Par-" He stopped seeing me. "Hot!"

"Excuse me?"

"Kya 'excuse me'?" He said cornering me to a corner, of course.

"Zain dekho, please jao yaha se!" I shivered as he slightly traced a droplet on my face. He was wearing a grey t-shirt with red trousers, looking handsome, as always. Shauhar kiska hai? I blushed.

"Nahi toh kya kr logi? Maarogi?"

"Zain please jaane do!" He slightly neared his face to mine. He was about to kiss.. when...

"AAALLIIIYYYAAA!" Ammi! Abhi hi bulana tha? I laughed seeing Zain's face. I went to the washroom with my clothes to change.

"Tumhe toh mei baad mei dekh lunga... Malika-E-Zain!" I heard him say before I entered the room.

Next Morning
Zain's POV
5:30 am

Oh don't ask! His 'Abbu'.. IS TRYING TO KILL ME.

"Zain beta?" I opened my eyes to see Mr. Kadus standing there on the terrace. Beta? Why is he calling me beta? Wait! What the hell is up here?

"Oh! Good Morning Uncle!"

"Uncle? Arre call me 'Abbu'! After all ab mei tumhara father-in-law hu na!" I choked on my water.

"Aap theek toh hai na Uncle?" I am growing suspicious.

"Theek? Arre mei first class hu! Chalo jogging ke liye chalte hai!"

"Lekin uncle abhi toh sirf 4 baje hai!"

"Toh kya hogya? Chalo!" He grew strict again. Old habits die hard na!

Subah se yaha hu. Can you imagine ki mei 1 and a half hour se dhodh rha hu? Uncle beech mei ruk kar kehte hai 'baccha tum aage jao, mei thoda aaram karunga' Allah! This man is going to be the end of me. Kya kya papad belne padenge Aaliya ko apna banane ke liye ab mujhe?

"Beta tum kaha kho gye ho?"

"Kahi nahi Uncle!" Allah!

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Padh lia? Ab comment kro!

Thanks a lot and take care.
Lots of love,
-Tanya.

Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Lovely update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww..thank u sooo much tanu...and it was an awesome update.I mean seriously, u are also slowly becoming besharam...Zain coming in through d window when Aliya is just wearing a towel ,huh? ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG! This was the other side of Tanya? Besharam Tanya? 🀣
Awesome Tanya I loved this update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

Aww..thank u sooo much tanu...and it was an awesome update.I mean seriously, u are also slowly becoming besharam...Zain coming in through d window when Aliya is just wearing a towel ,huh? ☺️


Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

OMG! This was the other side of Tanya? Besharam Tanya? 🀣

Awesome Tanya I loved this update!



Tum dono ke saath reh reh ke mei bhi besharam ho gyi hu!
You two have spoilt me too! And I am not Besharam by the way!
Tum sab ke liye likha tha.. Agli baar se nhi likhungi if you insist! Huh!

Thnks...!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice update πŸ˜ƒ .. I have almost read all your FF , OS and must say u r an amazing writer.. keep it up... and please continue soon .. can't wait to read other parts..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan




Tum dono ke saath reh reh ke mei bhi besharam ho gyi hu!
You two have spoilt me too! And I am not Besharam by the way!
Tum sab ke liye likha tha.. Agli baar se nhi likhungi if you insist! Huh!

Thnks...!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Tanya mein besharam hoon? 😲 Mene abhi tak SR bhi nahi dekha hai you know?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Zain is too good in passing comments...
He he he loved it...
Continue soon...
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