zaya os :bhula dena

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Bhula dena

Hello every1 this is my first os bcoz I turned tum hi ho into a ss

So officially my first os

Soo plz like n comment

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After three months of hatred, three months of beintehaa nafrat , three months of trying to forget her

After that day when osman died aliya was never spoken in barkat villa everyone hated her name

Her things were thrown out she was thrown out but no could erase her for their lives

After that day when ever fahad read namaz he remembered aliya

When shazia went to kitchen she remembered her

Nafisa smiled outside but is dying from the guilt that was inside her

Zain his live was mess his room was hell all the pictures broken

He missed aliya that was the truth he never read namaz after aliya left

After three months there a news that left zain fahad nafisa shazia num it was a letter from ghulam that

Said "aliya is no more , she is dead "

Zain fainted he could not bear all this

They all rushed to bhopal

All they could see was aliya lying peacefully she was not the same she looked tired of everthing zain could not stop himself

He began to cry surriya did not show any reaction on it

Zain shouted aaallliiiyyyaaa oh alla ke bandi kaha jaa rahi ho 3 mahine ki kit-kit baki hai abhi tho uth jao jaldi

Warna pani dal dunga

Then 4 men came and started to take away aliya his aliya

Surriya came to zain and said zain she is gone the girl who took your dad away from you is going away

You should be happy

The truth was aliya was gone she was no more

Zain went to see her room there he saw his pics their pics

And then his eyes fall on a file he saw and it a result of pregnancy result

Aliya was pregnant

Wht did she not told him maybe he was to cruel on her but he was not a monster or beast or maybe he was

His baby his aliya his dad was gone there was no one would stand beside him when he needed support

He was alone alone he saw aliya's diary he started reading it

July 10

Ramdhan is starting I m soo exited and bst part zain is keeping his first roza

I m so happy n I wish mamu will soon recover

July 15

Today I hate zuber he is just soo cheap how could he

I loved the way zain supported me he is the love of my life

A lone tear escaped from his eyes after reading the line

July 21

Zain wants me to go no one is there with me today mamu and zain both left me

The reason of my life want me to go

I don't know where I will go

Aug 5

I m here again in bhopal from where I started my life

I don't know how I m going to live without zain

Aug 12

No phone call ? what was my mistake ? I still love zain and will love him till my last breath

Aug 18

Today I got a call from mami she told me take some money and leave india and go as far as I can go

I m not what mami thinks of me

By now the eyes of zain were completely filled with tears

Aug 29

He must have forgot me and would hate me for everything would blame for everything bad in his life

Sept 5

Today came a very good news I m pregnant I so happy

I cant even write my feeling but i don't I to tell zain about this child

That was the last page of the diary

He shouted aliya he cried first time in three months he cried and this time no one stopped him

She is gone, she left him his mamu ki bhanji left him

Inspired by

Bhula dena mujhe

Hai alvida tujhe

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Safar yeh hai tera ,yeh raasta tera

Tujhe jeena hai... mere bina

Plz like n comment and for pm for my other works buddy me

CUTEZAYA

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zayalove thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its really nyc and sad i have tears in my eyes while reading this
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#3
She died :( such a sad OS. You portrayed all the emotions really well. Well done x
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#4
So emotional...
Mere to aasoon nikal rahein hai...
Beautifully penned...
Now u can try writing some happier than this...
Plz buddy me...u r too good
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant πŸ‘
it was extremely emotional ,very well written and last but not least Bhula dena mujhe suits perfectly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This ws very sad and emotional one!!!😭
very beautifully written..πŸ‘...
ty so much for d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its too emotional but still I loved it especially the diary part😭
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#8
Wow beautiful os
Loved it
Very nicely written
Very painful and emotional
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Very emotional and sad but yes was really good I felt the pain
And do on me ur works loved it
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oh god
I cried while reading this
very well. potrated
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