Raksha Bandhan- A ZaYa OS

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Hi people! First of all Happy Raksha Bandhan. I know I told you all will not be online today but I got this idea and couldn't hold my desire to write this. So I supposed it to be funny. And I hope it turned out one too. So here you go. This is dedicated to all my bhaiya, coz I don't have a real bhai. And mind you its is NOTHING related to sister-bro relationship. Without wasting time here you go with my update. Hope you all like it! :)

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Day of Raksha Bandhan
10th Aug 2014
Market
Narrator's POV

"Bhaiya arre yeh kese rakhiya dikha rhe ho? Kuch dhang ki dikhao!" Aaliya said on top of voice. It was such a hustle and bustle that they couldn't hear a single thing. Zain was on her side getting too much irritated.

"Madam dekhiye yeh waali!" The shopkeeper handed Aaliya another one.

"Hmm yeh theek hai!" Aaliya said checking out the rakhi.

It was something like this:




She turned to Zain. "Tum isse try krke dikhao!" She said.

"Kya??????" Zain eyes widened in shock "Pagal ho kya? Tum mujhe rakhi pehnaogi? Nhi mei nhi pehene waala! Shauhar hu mei tumhara. Tum mujhe rakhi pehnana chahti ho? NO!" Zain said running away to another shop.

"Arre Zain ruko toh!" She grabbed him back. "Ek baar pehn lo please mujhe Ali aur Rizwan ke liye leni hai. Please! Waise bhi tum bhi toh mere bhai jaise hi ho na?"

Zain's eyes widened. "Main tumhara bhai nhi hu!"

"Arre tum meri ammi ke bhatije ho! Means tum mere cousin ho! Toh tum bhi mere bhai ho!" Aaliya said. "Ab let me see how this looks on you"

And Aaliya tied the rakhi on Zain's hand. Zain closed his eyes tightly as to not see his wife, his love, TYING RAKHI ON HIS HAND! "Allah! Yeh dekhne se pehle mei marr kyu nhi gya?" Zain said closing his eyes even more tightly as she tied it on his hand. "Nikalo isse!"

"Acchi lg rhi hai! TUM HI RAKH LO!" Aaliya said as she started laughing.

"Shut up Mamu ki Bhanji! Ghar chalo, phir tumhe batata hu ki mei kesa bhai hu!" Zain said smirking as she blushed. "Take this out NOW!"

"Okay okay!" Aaliya said calmly as she took of the rakhi from his hand. Zain checked his hand, in case any traces of 'rakhi' are left on his hand. "Bhaiya esi ek dedo! Ab mujhe Ali ke liye chahiye! Zain..." Aaliya said as she looked at him with her puppy eyes "Mujhe ek aur select krni hai... tum ek aur-" Before she could complete he ran off.

"Arre Zain ruko toh! Apna wallet to deto jao! I don't have my purse! Zain!" Zain came back and gave the money to the shopkeeper. Aaliya giggled seeing Zain's face which was red.

At Rakhi Ceremony

"Ali!" Aaliya tied the rakhi around Ali's hand. "Zain helped me chose this for you. He tried it on"

"Zain? Tune apni biwi se rakhi bandhwayi? Yaar mei toh tujhe phattu samajhta tha, lekin tu toh maha-phattu nikla!" Rizwan said laughing. Everyone started giggling. Zain narrowed eyes at Aaliya who shrugged her shoulders joining others in their laughter.

"Arre Zain jeaju! Mujhe toh pehnane dijiye!" Aayat came and made Zain sit and tied Rakhi around his hand. "Rizwan, tumne bhi pehnani hai kya?" Everyone burst into laughter again.

"Chalo mei aap sab ke liye sharbat leke aati hu!" Aaliya said while she got a glimpse of Zain who was smirking as soon as she told everyone. She left. "I'll be right back!" Zain said and went behind Aaliya.

Kitchen

"Malika-E-Zain!" Zain said wrapping his arms around her as she placed the drinks on the plate. "Toh mei tumhara bhai hu?"

"Haan ho toh sahi" She turned around "Agar mei tumhare Dad ki 'bhanji' hu, toh huwe na tum mere bhai. Toh tumhe bhi toh meri raksha krni chahiye na!" She turned back.

"Accha?" He slowly placed a necklace on around her neck. It was a cute pendant with heart shape "Z+A" written on it. "Happy Raksha Bandhan princess!" He tied his arms again around her waist, tighter.

"This is beautiful Zain!" She turned around in his arms. "But what do I have to protect you from?".

"Your looks" He pushed back her hair.

"Your lips" He said pecking them.

"And your..." Zain finished smirking as his hands travelled to her lower body. "Shut up Zain!" Aaliya said blushing.

"Arre itna time lga rhe ho, jaldi kro bahi! We are waiting for the sharbat!" Came Osman's call from outside. They both rushed with the drinks.

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So how was it people? Nice? I am sending PM's from this account only. Actually my other account is not opening. Forgotten the password :p. Just kidding! Will send PM's from this only because I can't send links from that one because that account is a newbie. Hope you get it.

All my bhaiya's in this forum, Happy Raksha Bandhan Bhai!😃😃

Do leave your comments and likes. Would be waiting!😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres...
It was awesome...
Aliya saying zain as her bhai...
Heheheh...
Loved it...
Thanks for the pm... 😃
Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
gawd the 1st part was super funny
bechara zain!
it was really cute tanya
keep writing such LMAO type ones more often
Edited by vinu127 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one Tanu...it was beautiful
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OMG! This was so cute!
Tanya.I have no words.Awesome piece of entertainer.

Fabulous.Awesome.Amazing.Wonderful.

Love you Tanya!
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 10 years ago
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Oh good lord..the first part was so funny..esp. Zain's dialogue and i could imagine..Preetika nd harshad enacting it.As usual it was very well written...u r too good,Tanu.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG..
That was sooo cute Tanya..
Aaliya tying rakhi.. 😆
Bechaara zain 😆
Super cute..
Amazing 👏 👏
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg!!! tht ws super cute and funny update...
amazingly written...loved it..
ty so much for d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lmao this is too good roflmao.

Saach hi toh bol rahi hain Aaliya zain aur woh bhai behen hain chahe nikkah
Ho ya nahin. Lol if aise hi gifts milte rahenge im sure Aaliya will have no problem making Zain her bhai. But zain 🤣

Oh and I loved the end. Loved the combo of comedy and romance! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg first part was too hilarious
iam. laughing like an idiot infront of my mom
u r fabulous writer
bechara zain
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