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Posted: 10 years ago
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The truth was out and zain realized his mistake and finally succeeded in bringing back Aaliya to BV, but it was not the same as before, which he totally understood the reason. Zain was missing his MKZ, she was slowly warming up to him but there was still some distance between them. Zain decided to take her to goa.. He booked them the best cottage that money can buy...

Cottage:

Zain woke up after the afternoon nap only to find her missing on the bed.. He looked out only to find her standing near the edge of the water looking into the sky which has turned into a crimson red with a hint of pink hue...

He walked up her and stood beside her.

Aaliya... Are tum ut gaye kya, chalo coffee peethe hai.

Zain holding her hand bought her facing him.. "mujhe viswas nahi hota ki tum ne mujhe maaf kiya... Before he could say anything else she put her hand on his mouth...

Aaliya: tume yaad hai zain jab hum rudra aur paro ke saat darga mein mile the, tho pata hai maine kya bola tha "ki tum meri pehli aur akhri mohabbat ho.. tumara bina mein jeena sek lethi per tumhari jagah kisi aur ko nahi de sak thi zain"

Waise time kya hua hai abhi

Zain: 6:30

Aaliya... acha .. tho tumare paas sirf aadha ghanta bacha hai kit kit karne ke liya...

Saying that she took off towards the cottage... Zain happily surprised and he too ran behind her.

I know it's not gutter but wish I would see some moments like this


Comments and criticisms are most welcome...😊

Edited by Zaya.priyanka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
After appying the ointment on her palm and wrapping a gauze lightly around it,Zain sat staring blanky at her,her hand still in his.Aaliya noticed as a lone tear escaped from his eye...She had been working in the kitchen in the afternoon,when she had dropped hot oil on her hand and the surface ofher palm was scalded..SHe lifted his chin,and made him look at her.She wiped away the stray unbidden tear,before snuggling close to him.."Zainnn...main think hu...mujhe kuch nahi hua hia...dekho...""Humesha jhansi ki rani bane,ghoomti rehti ho..agar haath thoda aur jal jata...ya phir ...".."Zain...thank you.."
"thank yu kis cheez ke liye,MEZ?"he asked with a quizzical look on his face.She showed him her bandaged hand..and smled at him.A wide grin spread across his face..as the impending worries and premonitions slipped into oblivion,Zain wrapped his arm around her shoulder,bringing her close to him."Abhi toh sirf shuruwad hai.MAmu ki bhanji...aage aage deko hota hai kya..."he whispered the last part in her ears,gently brushing his soft lips against her earlobes,making shivers run down her spine..."Zain...tum bhi na..."she hit him playfully and rested her head on his shoulder.
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The members sitting at the dinner table was finding it difficult to stifle their laughter.Some blushed while others cleared their throat...
Zain was engrossed in feeding his MKB,since her right hand was injured,making sure to finish the entire plate.His eyes were fixed onher,making her blush often under his smouldering gaze.So much so,that instead of landing his hand on the plate to pick up the paratha,he had accidentally,placed it on the dinner mat.Aaliya's eyes shifted from him,to the others when they heard a loud chuckle...She blushed a deep shade of crimson,because the entire family was staring at their unbashed show of afection.She motioned Zain to stop wth her eyes,but stupid guy was too deep in thoughts around her.She bit his finger,making him gasp in pain.Zain looked at her angrily,more annoyed than angry,to be precise.Aaliya along with the others et out a bout of laughter,on seeing the scowl on Zain's face.When the others went bck to completing their dinner,Zain looked at her mischeviously,making sure that his eyes made her aware of the sweet revenge that would be waiting for her in their bedroom.

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Please continue...
Will update the super long guttery part..but someone please write some amazing,full on besharam dialogues before that😊
Edited by AnnRosewood - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Zaya.priyanka

The truth was out and zain realized his mistake and finally succeeded in bringing back Aaliya to BV, but it was not the same as before, which he totally understood the reason. Zain was missing his MKZ, she was slowly warming up to him but there was still some distance between them. Zain decided to take her to goa.. He booked them the best cottage that money can buy...

Cottage:

Zain woke up after the afternoon nap only to find her missing on the bed.. He looked out only to find her standing near the edge of the water looking into the sky which has turned into a crimson red with a hint of pink hue...

He walked up her and stood beside her.

Aaliya... Are tum ut gaye kya, chalo coffee peethe hai.

Zain holding her hand bought her facing him.. "mujhe viswas nahi hota ki tum ne mujhe maaf kiya... Before he could say anything else she put her hand on his mouth...

Aaliya: tume yaad hai zain jab hum rudra aur paro ke saat darga mein mile the, tho pata hai maine kya bola tha "ki tum meri pehli aur akhri mohabbat ho.. tumara bina mein jeena sek lethi per tumhari jagah kisi aur ko nahi de sak thi zain"

Waise time kya hua hai abhi

Zain: 6:30

Aaliya... acha .. tho tumare paas sirf aadha ghanta bacha hai kit kit karne ke liya...

Saying that she took off towards the cottage... Zain happily surprised and he too ran behind her.

I know it's not gutter but wish I would see some moments like this


Comments and criticisms are most welcome...😊


It does not have to gutter n it's very cute πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

After appying the ointment on her palm and wrapping a gauze lightly around it,Zain sat staring blanky at her,her hand still in his.Aaliya noticed as a lone tear escaped from his eye...She had been working in the kitchen in the afternoon,when she had dropped hot oil on her hand and the surface ofher palm was scalded..SHe lifted his chin,and made him look at her.She wiped away the stray unbidden tear,before snuggling close to him.."Zainnn...main think hu...mujhe kuch nahi hua hia...dekho...""Humesha jhansi ki rani bane,ghoomti rehti ho..agar haath thoda aur jal jata...ya phir ...".."Zain...thank you.."

"thank yu kis cheez ke liye,MEZ?"he asked with a quizzical look on his face.She showed him her bandaged hand..and smled at him.A wide grin spread across his face..as the impending worries and premonitions slipped into oblivion,Zain wrapped his arm around her shoulder,bringing her close to him."Abhi toh sirf shuruwad hai.MAmu ki bhanji...aage aage deko hota hai kya..."he whispered the last part in her ears,gently brushing his soft lips against her earlobes,making shivers run down her spine..."Zain...tum bhi na..."she hit him playfully and rested her head on his shoulder.
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The members sitting at the dinner table was finding it difficult to stifle their laughter.Some blushed while others cleared their throat...
Zain was engrossed in feeding his MKB,since her right hand was injured,making sure to finish the entire plate.His eyes were fixed onher,making her blush often under his smouldering gaze.So much so,that instead of landing his hand on the plate to pick up the paratha,he had accidentally,placed it on the dinner mat.Aaliya's eyes shifted from him,to the others when they heard a loud chuckle...She blushed a deep shade of crimson,because the entire family was staring at their unbashed show of afection.She motioned Zain to stop wth her eyes,but stupid guy was too deep in thoughts around her.She bit his finger,making him gasp in pain.Zain looked at her angrily,more annoyed than angry,to be precise.Aaliya along with the others et out a bout of laughter,on seeing the scowl on Zain's face.When the others went bck to completing their dinner,Zain looked at her mischeviously,making sure that his eyes made her aware of the sweet revenge that would be waiting for her in their bedroom.

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Please continue...
Will update the super long guttery part..but someone please write some amazing,full on besharam dialogues before that😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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No one here kya... why is this forum sooo dead...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can't write guttery stuff! Sorry! I am too bad at it!
And Ann already knows very well about it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing zaya moments u ppl r doing great. job
hatts off
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ok.. I will write one more:

Zain and aaliya driving back to mumbai from pune after attending a wedding... she was just enjoying the drive .. when suddenly aaliya saw streeet vendor selling sugarcane juice..

Aaliya... *screamed*.. Zain stoooppp.
Zain hit the breaks hard and looks at her shockingly .. Kya hua... tum teek ho??
Aaliya: han.. mein teek hu per thoda peecha mein ne ganne ka juice stall dekha... Chalona zain .. mujhe vo pina hai...
Zain... ya allah aliya... tumne tho mujhe daradiya tha..
Aaliya; Please zain .. tum mera liya itna bi nahi kar sak the *pouts her lips*.
zain ...ok.. malika e zain... tumari hukum sarakhon par

They turn the car back and ordered two glasses... She drank her glass so fast it left her with a foam mustache ... Zain couldnt stop himself laughing... *aaliya gave him a confused look* and zain said tumari tho munchem nikal aayi

she was about to wipe it out but he caught hold of her hand.. said mein kar tha hu..

zain came closer to her and with his thumb wiped it off her lips very slowly .. and licked it... with a slight smirk said... ab aaye na ganne ka ras ki asli maza...


Comments and criticisms are most welcome...πŸ˜ƒ



Edited by Zaya.priyanka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaya.priyanka

ok.. I will write one more:


Zain and aaliya driving back to mumbai from pune after attending a wedding... she was just enjoying the drive .. when suddenly aaliya saw streeet vendor selling sugarcane juice..

Aaliya... *screamed*.. Zain stoooppp.
Zain hit the breaks hard and looks at her shockingly .. Kya hua... tum teek ho??
Aaliya: han.. mein teek hu per thoda peecha mein neganne ka juice stall dekha... Chalona zain .. mujhe vo pina hai...
Zain... ya allah aliya... tumne tho mujhe daradiya tha..
Aaliya; Please zain .. tum mera liya itna bi nahi kar sak the *pouts her lips*.
zain ...ok.. malika e zain... tumari hukum sarakhon par

They turn the car back and ordered two glasses... She drank her glass so fast it left her with a foam mustache ... Zain couldnt stop himself laughing... *aaliya gave him a confused look* and zain said tumari tho munchem nikal aayi

she was about to wipe it out but he caught hold of her hand.. said mein kar tha hu..

zain came closer to her and with his thumb wiped it off her lips very slowly .. and licked it... with a slight smirk said... ab aaye naganne ka ras ki asli maza...


Comments and criticisms are most welcome...πŸ˜ƒ






superb
Edited by zaya-firdose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Zaya.priyanka- Har bar Aaliya ko ganne ka juice hi kyun yaada aata hai? Kahi pe nigahe, kahi pe nishaana!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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