Aakhri Alvida-Zaya OS

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heyya guys..its my first attempt at writing.. pyaar se padhna pleaseπŸ˜† and oh yes its a sad story..inspired by song Aakhri Alvida by Strings(thanks to BI)..all your expensive chappals and tamatars(fresh please) are welcomed😳

Bhopal,
Haider Residence,10 am

Shabana's daughter was lying on her bed,sleeping peacefully..If only she knew that her daughter is not going to wake up from her deep slumber..the clock struck ten yet her daughter was sleeping.She went to her room to check up on her only to find her Aliya sleeping peacefully.Her lips arched upwards to form a curve watching her daughter's sleeping form.Her daughter was facing the most difficult time of her life.Watching her sleep,her beautiful face relaxed without any sign of worry,her forehead free from wrinkles.She smiled.She smiled after one month of her bhaijaan's death,after one month of her daughter's divorce.Her smile vanished after few seconds and she frowned.She knew her daughter was an early riser.Never had she seen her daughter sleep this late.She sat on aliya's bed forwarding back of her hand to check her temperature.She flinched when her hand came in contact with aliya's cold skin.Her eyes widened.Terrified,she started waking aliya..after getting no response from her daughter she screamed on top of her lungs for her husband.She was scared.Scared of losing her..scared of losing someone so dear to her heart..someone whose happiness matter a world to her..someone whom she loved so much that she was ready to make sure she is happy..she was scared of losing her daughter aliya whom she had already lost on the day her bhaijaan's body was buried..the day when her daughter got divorced.Silence spread all over her as she saw her husband holding their sleeping daughter in his arms and crying his heart out.



Mumbai,
Barkat Royale,10:15 am

Zain Abdullah,CEO of Barkat Group of Hotels was nervous.Yes.Zain was nervous.It was an important day.He was to give presentation of Barkat group's new project "Barkat Galaxy" ,which was his dad's dream project to all the board members.He had taken over BGH after his father,Osman Abdullah's demise.He knew some of the members were against this decision.He had to prove them that he very much capable of running his father's empire..He knew this project was very close to his dad's heart,he wanted to make his dad proud.

Barkat Royale,
Conference room,10:35 am
Meeting had started 20 minutes ago and he was explaining all the board members about theri new project when his phone rang.Shit!he had forgot to keep his phone in silent mode.His Bhai's number was on display.He cut the call and continued with his presentation.His phone rang again Irritated,he excused himself and picked his bhai's call.
Zain-"Bhai..What the hell Bhai you know i'm in the middle of a very important meeting"..
Fahad-"Zain..Aliya is no more.She is dead."
Fahad was greeted by silence from the other side.
Blood came rushing down from Zain's face.He was not able to process what his brother had just said.He thought he had heard it wrong.
he stuttured while speaking on phone "B..Bhai yeh aap kya keh rahey hai?"
He could hear hi s brothers sobs from the other line.
Fahad-"Zain..aaliya..aaliya iss duniya mein nahi rahi."
Phone fell from Zain's hand..Dread spread all over him.Wind got knocked out of him that instant.He felt as if everything is empty..His knees felt weak,so weak that they were not able hold his weight..and with that he collapsed on the cold floor.His brother's words "Aliya is no more.She is dead.Aliya iss duniya mein nahi rahi" were constantly ringing in his ears.He remembered the time when she had come to meet him in jail,he remembered the time when her father had died in front of his eyes,time when he had divorced her.He had hated her immensenly since then.She was the reason for his father's death.She was his biggest mistake.Flashes of aliya's smiling face came over his eyes...flases of them together laughing,fighting,doing kitkit,making love,kissing each other,supporting and consoling each other..flashes of all the moments which he once tresured came over his eyes.His heart shattered like a pane of glass.He felt the place where his heart was few seconds ago 'empty'
He cried out her name on top of his lungs,
"Aaal-yaaa"!!!!!!
and broke into tears which refused to stop making his cheeks sticky.he cried.He cried for losing her.
They say those you love the most have the ability to hurt you worst.She had betrayed his trust.She had insulted the love he had for her and she was the reason his mentor,hiss guide,his best friend,his darling dad were not with him.He thought he hated her.He had thrown her out of his life and tried his best to move on.Tried!.Though she came in his thoughts every second,every minute,everyday he had spent away from her.He had started to realize that he will never be able to stop loving her.He was ashamed of himself for still loving her..he hated himself for loving the person who was responsible for his father's death.But after hearing the news his whole world came crashing down.He cannot believe all this.How can this happen with someone who called herself Allah's Laadli?
"Allah haafiz Zain" were the last words she had said to him.
he had asked her to stop taking his name.Never in his dreams had he thought that he'll never be able to hear her voice again..he was desperate to hear his name from her mouth.He was ready to trade his soul for that.
Never had he thought that it was her Aakhri Alvida.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was really nice!
It took me a while to read it though!
It was full of emotions and of course really nice!
Awesome work!
Please keep writing!


Thanks a lot and take care.

Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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This was beautifully written well done πŸ‘
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omg fabulously penned down
I cried while reading this update
heart touching update
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Wow...it was awesome
Imwas imagining it nd was feeeling it
Awesome dear!!!
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That was beautifully written πŸ‘
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tht ws superbb...very very emotional update..wonderfully written...πŸ‘πŸ‘
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You ar an amazing writer! This is penned so beautifully πŸ‘ write more. This forum has very less writers 😊
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You write so beautifuly, everything was just perfect!
Loved how u portrayed everything made me quite emotional cos I was informed of the death of someone who was close to me in the same way.


Hope to see you writing more in the futurex
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this os made me cry
this was amazing
no more to say i m speechless
amazing
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