Originally posted by: p_s05
"...Asad had officially been with Meher on her first birthday and for the last time."
Forgive me for being on another tangent, but for a few moments I couldn't help but think Asad was dead, the quoted narration and the flashbacks don't seem to move beyond the 1st two years of marriage. ðĪŠ
God forbid, nevertheless,that thought was a result of an overworked brain. ðģ ð
ha ha... ð
Asad is doing absolutely fine! ðð
Okay now that I got that thought out, the more logical explanation:
They drifted apart in his attempt to provide a better life for them but in the process losing the opportunity to enjoy life together in the present. ðĨš
that's exactly what had happened...
sometimes people just forget to value what they have, and in that process, they leave out a lot of things on their way!
"I am so sorry Zoya..And I promise, this picture stays in my phone till the day I remain guilty of my act!"
The title directed my though process in relation to the conversation about the mysterious road and the significance's about the introspect they both shared while sitting along the road, this is the journey of Asad walking back home, to his family whom he has drifted from in an attempt he thought would give them a better life.
i can't tell you how happy i am to read your comment..
you have said exactly what my thought is about the story! ð
the road had nothing to do.. it's their mysterious life that has become aimless now! ð
But I'm certain his wallpaper shall be changed after Meheks next birthday. ð
for sure ð
This is a beautiful well thought out story, thanks for delivering your talent to us.
thank you so much dear... for giving your point of view in this...
i am realy glad that you are loving this story! ðģ
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