"...Asad had officially been with Meher on her first birthday and for the last time."
Forgive me for being on another tangent, but for
a few moments I couldn't help but think Asad was dead, the quoted narration and the
flashbacks don't seem to move beyond the 1st two years of marriage. 🤪
God forbid, nevertheless,that thought was a result of an overworked brain. 😳 😆
Okay now that I got that thought out, the more
logical explanation:
They drifted apart in his attempt to provide a better
life for them but in the process losing the opportunity to enjoy life
together in the present. 🥺
"I am so sorry Zoya..And I promise, this picture stays in my phone till the day I remain guilty of my act!"
The title directed my though process in relation to the conversation
about the mysterious road and the significance's about the introspect they both
shared while sitting along the road, this is the journey of Asad walking back home, to his family whom he
has drifted from in an attempt he thought would give them a better life.
But I'm certain his wallpaper shall be changed after Meheks next birthday. 😉
This is a beautiful well thought out story, thanks
for delivering your talent to us.
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