Your my happiness ss zaya <3 on current track chapter 4 pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Bravo for pary 3 the precap is really interesting look forward to reading it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Just read all of this
Very nice as so far
Update soon and pls pm me when u do
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awesome teaser
waiting for the update
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#34
Plz update fast!!!
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Uske baad toh mai apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yell at me scream at me, sorry you all I had to leave the country, and the place I went had no internet connection. please forgive me. here is a very long update.
CHAPTER 4
Zain left the house and got into his car and drove off. he really didn't have work, he just wanted to get out to think about what just happened a few minutes ago. "dad gave 51% owner of barkhat riyal to Aliyah, Miss World thinking Aliyah and rehaan have a thing."
"HONK" wet the car behind Zain. Zain said sorry and continued to drive. when he reached a red light he stopped, he looked at his right and noticed rehaan and Aliyah walking, so he decided to follow them, not knowing why?
REhaan and Aliyah
"Aliyah you should not have said no to the 51%. You still have time to change your mind" said rehaan hoping for an answer from a quiet Aliyah but Aliyah continued walking.
"Aliyah" said rehaan louder while grabbing her hand
"what! what can I do rehaan, its over between me and Zain," said Aliyah with tears
"no it's not, please just listen to me, I know how to fix this, usman chose you because he believed in you, don't put him down."
Aliyah was crying, so rehaan hugged her to comfort her
Poor Zain from far he saw what happened, but heard nothing, Zain drove off angry. "Aliyah, why would you do this and rehaan, why??" Zain was upset and confused, was what he really saw true. Did his wife move on. " no she can't" Zain quickly got out of his car and entered his dads office. He sat on the chair and "i won't let you down dad, never."
Zain wanted some coffee, he went the break room and was shocked by what he saw. " aliy...Aliyah" stuttered Zain. "what are you doing here?" asked Zain
" I'm 51% OWNER,i have the right to be here, so i'm your boss" said Aliyah looking straight at Zain.
Zain just laughed and said" you said you wanted nothing, what changed your mind?
"mamu, I can't let him down, he believes in me, I can't let him down, so if you can excuse me" said Aliyah walking passed Zain
Zain grabbed her hand and pushed her toward the wall.
"i won't let you succeed I won't let you live." said Zain
"Zain your hurting me, Zain let go" aliayah said while struggling to get free
"ZAIN!!!" ZAIN FINALLY LET GO AND WALKED OUT.
In Zain room
Zain held his dad's picture and said " I won't let her win, she cannot ruin my dad's dream" Zain fell asleep while hugging his dad's picture"
On the other hand. Aliayah was in bed with Zain's pic. "I'M SORRY ZAIN I CAN'T PUT MAMU DOWN, I LOVE YOU ZAIN, PLEASE FORGIVE ME". Aliyah hugged the picture and cried her self to sleep, like any other night.
Okay you guys hoped you liked it leave lots o comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
really nice yaar
continue ASAP
damn good
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
very nice
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
It was really nice...continue asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

really nice yaar
continue ASAP
damn good

thanks, glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

It was really nice...continue asap

thanks im happy that u liked it
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